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Its truly rare for there to be a good fanfic.I suggest that instead of focusing on outisde world and small politics too much you should focus more on the tomb of nazarick as kingdom building.You can take reference from the the book of dark wolf shiro on fanfiction net-A gamers multiverse adventure which is the only other somewhat done correctly for a few chapters,overlord fanfic.
The novel overall is very good but story focuses way too much on girls and their weird antics that it gets annoying.The most glaring issue I feel ion the story is that mc's first love interest "Taeko" is nothing special and is very mediocre commpared to other options and author focuses way too much on her without introducing any special trait for her.It would have been better if author focused on esdeath only.
whose blood and whose sweat doesnt matter here
Daisy and chloe are not worthy enough to be the main girls for mc
I wonder why he thinks that he wont eat a devil fruit since its a great boost in power without any side effects,he should eat a strong one though.Does he eat one?
Thats a huge buzzkill for me,restricting himself in a world of pokemon