Review Detail of Mechanicas in OVERLORD: GOD OF THE NEW WORLD

Its truly rare for there to be a good fanfic.I suggest that instead of focusing on outisde world and small politics too much you should focus more on the tomb of nazarick as kingdom building.You can take reference from the the book of dark wolf shiro on fanfiction net-A gamers multiverse adventure which is the only other somewhat done correctly for a few chapters,overlord fanfic.