i agree with making the ordeals shorter. the ordeals are a bit dragged making the ordeal boring.

tuff times create strong men and also the blood making them stronger

we need raws -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

i hope u will continue this story very enjoyable -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

i feel like the chapters are too short. thank you for the chap

i like the features of the system and the multiverse it opens lot of possibility in the future. I hope that this isn't a novel that the mc becomes a dog to a female

pretty good

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