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DaoistSwiftGull
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To just say the novel is great is an understatement in itself, it nothing less than a gem in Webnovel. In the beginning it might be that seeing the main character behave and direct his actions as a coward would and not an MC, would cause people to drop the book. That's the place where many others drag on that characteristics of the MC which one wouldn't like to see from a fantasy novel, but that is where @Arkinslize differs from others, all actions and words or even slight gestures all have a play in the future of how it would work. The idea on the which the novel is based till date is unique too! It doesn't plagiarize any cliched trope/even story arcs. There is no forced love , or any theme where I see anyone and he becomes my brother for life and they can never leave me or betray me. The novel is realistic and focuses on character development. The greatest plus point for me was the fact that the novel has a suspense element and is unpredictable so it doesn't allow anyone to guess what is about to happen, it is sudden and is exciting just like watching a film. Though the novel has hardly anything that one could even change, as it would probably change the way people thought, but I would like to add a suggestion, which the author might even find unappealing:- 1) My suggestion one is taht could we have shorter chapters for the Ordeals. 2) Many times a lot of things eg: (powerups, certain special skills, abilities,people) are attributed towards higher ordeals, thought the fact that the people arrived on the planet almost at the same time. Maybe other reasons could be used to explain the theory. 3) Maybe a bit less on description in some chapters? These suggestions would personally make this novel even better in my opinion

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i agree with making the ordeals shorter. the ordeals are a bit dragged making the ordeal boring.