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Pooyan_Hoshyar

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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar5d
    Commented

    Jirou is indeed the best girl.

    Ch 32 Exam Conclusion
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    MHA: The Warping Hero
    Anime & Comics · TeemVizzle
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar8d
    Commented

    There are Shinigami, Quincy, Hollows and Fullbringers... He's not a Shinigami or Hollow so he's either a Quincy or a Fullbringer... There's an explanation for his powers right?

    Ch 6 Equivalent Exchange
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    Not a Mob: Psycho
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar8d
    Commented

    Is he a Quincy?

    Ch 6 Equivalent Exchange
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    Not a Mob: Psycho
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar20d
    Replied to Buddha_

    Is it dropped?

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    Reader's POV
    Fantasy · Buddha_
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar1mth
    Posted

    I dropped it after chapter 32... The MC was strong with even stronger skills but author kinda ruined the story by adding a system... Well I could get past that but there are chapters that are just filled with system notifications and anything system related and even during fights which is very annoying and somehow he keeps getting high graded stuffs from the system... MC was a lonely god with a very boring life so when he became a mortal he decided to have a simple life which means as long as he can earn enough money to provide food and the necessities and experience new things he'll be content with his life that means he has no intention of ever going back to the realm of gods or becoming one ever again but dude went straight and made Welf his loyal slave with a skill he obtained from system lol... So whatever Welf or any of his future companions say is not genuine they're just under a spell... Thers is no bond between them.... If you're a fan of novels with systems this is for you but I'm sure even you'll be sick of it soon... Author has good grasp on grammar and a great imagination and creativity sense.

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    Danmachi: The Crimson Flash
    Anime & Comics · Plagiarist_Astre
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar1mth
    Commented

    Too much info... Almost the whole chapter was info about skills which I skipped through... I think the system was unnecessary since the MC doesn't have any grand goal... I'm giving it a chance cause it had a good start but if it continues like this it just won't be worth it.

    Ch 18 Strange Strengthened War Shadow
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    Danmachi: The Crimson Flash
    Anime & Comics · Plagiarist_Astre
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar1mth
    Commented

    Tftc

    Ch 34 Chapter 24 : Birthday Party
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    TBATE : A Masterpiece
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar1mth
    Commented

    It feels a bit unrealistic that he ends up saving everyone... He seems almost perfect as he never makes a mistake I mean knowing the plot only helps you so far... I think the story could use a little bit of tragic.

    Ch 123 Something Very Unexpected
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    The Walking Dead: A New Beginning From the End of the World
    TV · SrCuervo
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar1mth
    Commented

    Tnx for the chapter.

    Ch 119 Cleaning
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    The Walking Dead: A New Beginning From the End of the World
    TV · SrCuervo
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar2mth
    Commented

    Tnx for the chapter 😊

    Ch 97 Getting into action
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    The Walking Dead: A New Beginning From the End of the World
    TV · SrCuervo
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar2mth
    Commented

    Welcome back

    Ch 116 King of hell
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    Rebirth in Bleach
    Anime & Comics · DemonicPanda
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar2mth
    Commented

    What does Airon look like?

    Ch 4 Being Determined
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    The Walking Dead: A New Beginning From the End of the World
    TV · SrCuervo
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar2mth
    Replied to SrCuervo

    Yes definitely... You could add some elements of The last of us... I think would be cool but you should probably wait for a while and have the story progress more.

    Ch 81 A Night War
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    The Walking Dead: A New Beginning From the End of the World
    TV · SrCuervo
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar2mth
    Replied to SrCuervo

    I don't think a making a harem suit you... As someone who read your last work, you don't spend enough time between MC and the potential heroine(which is a mistake btw... I think you need to get the MC and the heroine to interact with each other more... Basically make a foundation, a bond between them and then work from there). In my opinion making a harem doesn't sound too realistic in this world. You can have him be in a few relationships till he meets the main heroine though.(I think this is better than harem) Anyway, keep up the good work.👍

    Ch 70 What I have to protect
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    The Walking Dead: A New Beginning From the End of the World
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar2mth
    Commented

    I hope your next story have fewer grammatical problems and better dialogues.

    Ch 132 End
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    Infinite Worlds: Attack on Titan
    Anime & Comics · SrCuervo
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar2mth
    Commented

    Alice or Rindo

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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    Food Wars: Gourmet King
    Anime & Comics · Arokey
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar2mth
    Replied to Goran_Manev

    Who is the love interest??

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    TBATE - A More Experienced Hero
    Book&Literature · SleepyWalkerYN
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar2mth
    Commented

    So love interest is Lilia?

    Ch 17 Chapter 17 - A big help
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    TBATE - A More Experienced Hero
    Book&Literature · SleepyWalkerYN
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar2mth
    Commented

    I still don't know what that smoke coming out of his legs is.

    Ch 10 Chapter 10 - Befriending with elves
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    Book&Literature · SleepyWalkerYN
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  • Pooyan_Hoshyar
    Pooyan_Hoshyar2mth
    Replied to Zaelum

    Is it Haram? Romance?

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    Journey to the One Piece
    Anime & Comics · thelightedghost
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