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I dropped it after chapter 32... The MC was strong with even stronger skills but author kinda ruined the story by adding a system... Well I could get past that but there are chapters that are just filled with system notifications and anything system related and even during fights which is very annoying and somehow he keeps getting high graded stuffs from the system... MC was a lonely god with a very boring life so when he became a mortal he decided to have a simple life which means as long as he can earn enough money to provide food and the necessities and experience new things he'll be content with his life that means he has no intention of ever going back to the realm of gods or becoming one ever again but dude went straight and made Welf his loyal slave with a skill he obtained from system lol... So whatever Welf or any of his future companions say is not genuine they're just under a spell... Thers is no bond between them.... If you're a fan of novels with systems this is for you but I'm sure even you'll be sick of it soon... Author has good grasp on grammar and a great imagination and creativity sense.
Too much info... Almost the whole chapter was info about skills which I skipped through... I think the system was unnecessary since the MC doesn't have any grand goal... I'm giving it a chance cause it had a good start but if it continues like this it just won't be worth it.
I don't think a making a harem suit you... As someone who read your last work, you don't spend enough time between MC and the potential heroine(which is a mistake btw... I think you need to get the MC and the heroine to interact with each other more... Basically make a foundation, a bond between them and then work from there). In my opinion making a harem doesn't sound too realistic in this world. You can have him be in a few relationships till he meets the main heroine though.(I think this is better than harem) Anyway, keep up the good work.👍