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Toxic_318

Toxic_318

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2021-03-03 JoinedGlobal
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_3181mth
    Replied to raiinz

    lol. go touch some grass

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    Asura's Path In Douluo Dalu
    Anime & Comics · Lafafar
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_3182mth
    Posted

    Good stuff. It absolutely pulls you in and mesmerizes you with the beauty of the story. I haven't read something like this in a while. Keep up the good work author!!!

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    Fate/The Hunter and His Doll
    Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_3183mth
    Commented

    Bruh. The first chapter, and the third hokage is acting out of character already.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    Naruto: Monthly Refreshing Passive System
    Anime & Comics · Zaelum
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_3183mth
    Commented

    tbh genius is overrated, since most authors fail to truly write out a genius character. As far as I've seen, the only place those mc's use their 'genius' is to learn things at a super fast rate (and wow the other characters)

    Ch 1 Waking up In an Alley Way (Reworked Must Read)
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    In Marvel with the Perfect Body...
    Anime & Comics · Aaron_Chong_6689
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_3183mth
    Posted

    It's a really good read, one I haven't had in a while. It has very solid writing _ it's not just about grammar and the stuff, you can tell the author's good the moment you read it. I like the characters introduced by the author and the way the story unfolds. It only has 10 chapters right now, but every chapter is pretty length, about 3 - 4 times the length of a normal chapter here in webnovel. All in all, the author have done an amazing job, and I hope he/she keeps up the great work!

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    Gotham's Dead End Bar
    Anime & Comics · Daddy
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_3186mth
    Commented

    Did he?

    Hermione hesitated to counter Salim's point, unable to find the words. After much thought, her myriad of thoughts condensed into a simple phrase: "I said my name is Hermione Granger, so please don't call me by other names."
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    In Harry Potter, as the Big Boss
    Book&Literature · Regulus_Dragneel
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_3187mth
    Commented

    Wry? It shold be "amused". Feels like it fits the mc more.

    Even so, Aziel only watched her behavior from a distance with a wry expression, something that seemed to piss Suzu off even more.
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    Arifureta: God of Extinction
    Anime & Comics · Depraved_Chap
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_3188mth
    Posted

    Haaah. This is a pretty good read for me. There's not much comparison since there aren't many Arifureta fanfics out there but this one doesn't seem to be the wish-fulfillment fanfic where mc is the most handsome guy around and gets 10 billion girls. Well, at least for the time being. This fanfic has actual characters with emotions in them (yeah, this is my main judging criteria) and the plot seems to be progressing nicely. So yeah, 4.8 out of 5.

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    Arifureta: God of Extinction
    Anime & Comics · Depraved_Chap
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_3188mth
    Commented

    Nice cover! Where did you get that from?

    Ch 36 Chapter 36: Nightmares
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    Arifureta: God of Extinction
    Anime & Comics · Depraved_Chap
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_3188mth
    Commented

    a "top-grade no-level restriction"? What's that?

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    BTTH: Beginning Strategy Medusa
    Anime & Comics · Gojo_Sensei_
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_3188mth
    Replied to king8512743

    You know one of those lengthy speeches a college prof gives at the start of the term? Yeah, it's like that

    Ch 1 Important Notes
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    Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)
    Anime & Comics · mythoast
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_3189mth
    Replied to XII_6869

    Yeah those chapters are super short

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    In Marvel as The Hive
    Movies · ZeroX0666
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_3189mth
    Commented

    I thought it was deacon?

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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_3189mth
    Posted

    Uhh, yeah. I hate to be the one doing this, but this fanfic... well, there's very little point in reading it. The content of the first 10 chapters or so (maybe more, but I didn't read further) is plain repetition of the previous chapters. The same content, the same format, the same formula, with just the topic being different. I can even see the pattern here: Mc is talented --> Mc learns a new thing --> Mc makes great progress in new thing --> People are in awe. Basically just that. In fact, there several words such as "grace" and "ethereal" which have been repeated so much that I noticed it despite not actively looking and trying to dissect the fanfic. Also, the reader feels extremely detached to the mc because, well, we know nothing about him asides from the fact that he is talented. We never see him conversing normally (day to day interactions), we never know his likes and dislikes, we can't see and feel what he's thinking, etc. Basically, the mc feels like an emotionless machine. I don't know about others, but I find him quite boring and basically skimmed over the remaining chapters. Asides from that, the grammar is solid and you'll find no mistakes there. At least I found none.

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    White Sword Dragon
    Anime & Comics · Balem
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_31810mth
    Commented

    I still feel like it was a bit unrealistic. Sure, innate full spirit power may be a big deal but I don't think it would reach the Supreme Pontiff immediately. Perhaps he would be recruited into some sort of camp, where the talents are filtered out? Then again, my judgement may be wrong since there were quite a number of innate full spirit power in canon.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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    Soul Land: Grasping The Sky
    Anime & Comics · Ayries_Jesea
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_31810mth
    Posted

    It's a pretty good translation, with some occasional problems, but nothing you can't ignore. I read the raw ahead, and it has some pretty entertaining moments. Sure, some things might get boring and repetitive but as far as I can tell, the mc uses his brain more than the typical fanfic. The author sticks to the rules they set, which means that there are no 'exceptions' made for the sake of the plot. The system feels a bit unexplained though. Nevertheless, an entertaining read and definitely a better one compared to the numerous junk out there.

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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_31810mth
    Commented

    Umm, so this system is basically "Pocket Hunting Dimension"?

    Ch 1 Prelude (1/?)
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    HI3RD: Honkai's Nemesis
    Video Games · Lazy_Author69
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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_31810mth
    Commented

    Frost-Flame Art?

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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_31810mth
    Commented

    I didn't read the original BTTH so I don't know but why didn't he just swipe everything in that ring? I mean, the system allows him to store things so he should be able to steal everything from Xiao Yan's ring

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  • Toxic_318
    Toxic_31810mth
    Posted

    As the Chinese say, this fanfic is "full of water". Couldn't have made it more boring, but then again, what was I expecting....

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    Marvel: My Talent Can Be Infinitely Enhanced
    Anime & Comics · RanobeMen
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