Hello this is for the author, I havent read the book yet though i plan too once the book hits 500 ch but i would recommend you read the other books in this genre to better understand what the pitfalls of the genre are and how to avoid them, in particular I recommend reading tyranny of steel, 1453: revival of byzantium and low dimensional game along with chrysalis (chrysalis dosent have much to do with the genre but the excerpts he writes make the world building a first class example on how to properly world build). One more thing, if you want to find good videos on how to improve your writing and world building watch a youtuber called “hello future me” he breaks all of it down very neatly and makes the topics very interesting as well. Thanks alot and have a great day

Hey author just a heads up the new cover art is from a p*orn manga. Just a fyi. Love the book keep up the hard work[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Its 2 ch every day he just took nov off

Hey author i love the novel and please keep up the good work. I see how hard youve worked to creat such a buetiful world and narrative so please keep up the amazing work

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Love the story. Ive read all 2000 or so chapters so far I absolutely love the book and all the unique world building so far. The only thing that personally irks me is that i dont think he uses the technique upgrade feture proactively enough saying that hes saving up instead or that the next technique could build off of the previous one but why would it matter if it was building off the previous one, its not like he forgets the previous technique as soon as he upgraded it right? So i dont really get why he doesn’t upgrade his techniques as soon as he can. But besides that inconsistency in his logic i love all the rest of the story. I think this book is nearly perfect in all aspects and keep up the great work author

AUTHOR IMPORTANT MESSAGE Later in the chapter when he was balencing his body and soul strength the time for assimilating the time carp bloodline is wrong. It counted the time outside the origin and not the inside like it was supposed to

AUTHOR IMPORTANT MESSAGE The time for the bloodline assimilation after he tried to balance his soul strength is wrong. You counted the time outside the origin and not inside it

AUTHOR IMPORTANT MESSAGE the time for the bloodline is wrong you counted it for the outside world not in the origin

Keep it up love the content

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To be honest i love your novel and ivr also read your book agr of hearos and thought they wre both great. You make your characters seem real and add alot of depth to your story considering how long your chaps are. This adds alot of background and world building and i think those are the strongest points of your novels. Love the novel keep up the good work[img=update][img=update]

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Hi i just want to mention that i love the book you made and the fact that you go through your reviews makes it that much better. I just wanted to give some of my critiques and comments about the book so far. First: i am currently 198 pages into the book(just a heads up) So i just wnated to say that i really like what you did here with the world building and how much effort you put into making the game world seem both alive and massive at the same time. One thing i didt like about the book though is how much of a slow burn it is as in it takes a very long time for the mc to become stronger, to be honest i really like to read so this isnt much of a issue for me as it would be for some others so yeah. Another thing that i like about the book is mixing in the prespecive of multiple characters such as his freind erik or the leaders of the empires. So yeah i just wanted to give a quick review of the book so far.

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I honestly love this novel and i hope you put back the incressed realse date and i sincely hope to see you get more support for this amazing work