Ankit_GoDelock
I am a mechanical engineer. I love to read in my free time.
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Ankit_GoDelock2yrReplied to LegolasGreenleafCh 9 Fear- Ankit_GoDelock2yrCommentedCh 9 Fear
- Ankit_GoDelock2yrCommentedCh 23 Not so easy mission
- Ankit_GoDelock2yrCommented
Like this history.
In fact, the history of Border Town was less than three decades long. Compared to nearly 200 years of Longsong Stronghold, it was a mere newborn baby. Originally Duke of Ryan was just going to build an outpost here as an early warning for the invasion of demonic beasts, but he did not expect to discover a wealth of mineral resources at North Slope Mountain after land reclamation. So he decided to set up the town here, and named it Border Town. In a sense, it was North Slope Mine that created the town. - Ankit_GoDelock2yrReplied to lil_fox
I think so too.
Through the French window behind him, he could see the town extending into endless mountains. The mountain passed through the continents of the Impassable Mountain Range, dividing Kingdom of Graycastle and Wild Places into east and west. And North Slope Mountain was just a branch of the Impassable Mountain Range. - Ankit_GoDelock2yrCommentedCh 15 Misconceptions
- Ankit_GoDelock3yrReplied to Ankit_GoDelockCh 14 The Ability
- Ankit_GoDelock3yrCommentedCh 14 The Ability
- Ankit_GoDelock3yrPosted
Nic work. The story is very well written. The main character Roland is an intriguing character. He is a good guy to a fault, and because of that, or in some cases despite that, it's hard to hate him. The witches also show promise as supporting characters, and the ones that already had a part in the plot, are fleshed out, are not redundant, and are not useless to the plot. The magic system in the story is very unique and integrates well with science. Overall, the story is very much recommended, I will not go into the world-building, as to not spoil anything. Another nice thing is that the story has already been complete. I hope you all enjoy reading the story just as much as I did. 😊
- Ankit_GoDelock3yrCommented
What does this mean?
I H Z H I's CEO. - Ankit_GoDelock3yrCommentedCh 16 Cooking in the wild
- Ankit_GoDelock3yrCommentedCh 4 Preparation plan and Chen Dawei
- Ankit_GoDelock3yrCommentedCh 1 Returning to the past