thx for the chap

so Sad that he drop this :(

Author, I have found so far a fantastic idea. There was only one point that bothered me a little: the fact that there was no test for the healing factor and that the mutation occurred in a few months. If possible, so that your story is more reliable, I advise you to change it. Ex: after 2 years of tests, without discovering anything wrong, it was distributed to the population, but the mutation started to occur after 3 years of global distribution. Or something like that, I'm not a writer, but a well-researched and truthful story always tastes different. Well, even if you don't change I thought your story idea was very good, even more so because I didn't see any signs of a system, which only makes it seem like a lazy story. Anyway, I hope this is as great a book as it appears to be.[img=recommend]

unfortunately this happens to everyone, at least I hope so. It's the weight of maturity and responsibilities.

This novel is full of inconsistencies

i thought she was 12, but looks like she is 6

I've been thinking about doing a review of this story for a long time, but only now did I find the time to do so. It will be a bit long and with some spoilers, but I assure you that I will try to demystify everything I can of the negative comments against this novel. At the outset, it is important to point out that most of the negative criticisms of this story are due to the fact that people do not read what they think they will find in the novel. In fact, based on the title and summary, an idea is created that the protagonist is an "anti-hero" or even a villain. The beginning of the story also creates a classic wuxia vibe, a guy raising his cultivation madly without caring about much. What happens is that there is a hidden motive behind everything that happens. The protagonist no longer being a "villain" is a direct consequence of what happens to him. After all, there's no way he's retarded enough to want to fight any sucker that comes along instead of trying to get stronger, or create allies for him to get stronger. Everything revolves around his survival. The protagonist is so ridiculously out of character that he doesn't care about anyone else's opinion, at least over time he gets that way. His every action is aimed at getting stronger to survive the weight of imminent death that threatens to fall on his head. Of course, he still has emotions and desires. However, he's not like any brainless guy who thinks with his duck. He has real relationships with people, he doesn't take any women (sometimes he does), there is friendship between him and some women around him. In short, his goal is to do everything he can to survive and help the people around him to achieve their goals. That's it for the protagonist. (spoilers) super handsome, charismatic, intelligent, no inflated ego, no jealousy, with a strong goal, he keeps a secret even from himself. Anyway, he, in my opinion, is the most humanly possible, impossible and incredible protagonist I've ever seen; No, he is not like that from the beginning, everything takes its time in this novel. Regarding the story. At first it seems to be quite common, with some mysteries. The power of the protagonist is quite different from the usual, a kind of satire to most other novels of the type. What happens is that as the story goes deeper into the world, it starts to get more detailed and complex. So much so that (spoiler) when the protagonist leaves the world of origin each event takes about 50 chapters to happen. If it were in a book that comes out all at once, it would be amazing, with how well the writing is, but as it is a webnovel it gives a lot of anguish to have to wait every day and when you read the chapter it still hasn't happened what you wanted. But for me this is the best part of this novel. I just can't stop reading. When I see that a new chapter has come out, my heart already accelerates. (Oh, how I love this romance) The secondary characters are amazing, well written and with their own personality. My only problem is the Chinese names that I can never remember who is who. Only the most different ones like the protagonist, the bird, the seer and his helper (that's right, I only remember when I see it written, if you ask me his name I say I don't know, but it's something like wey wuwin , ww for intimates). Regarding alchemy, at some point he talks about how it has no limit and it goes against heavenly laws, something like that. Thus, it also goes against the celestial dao. Based on this, those who read it already have an idea that the sin the title talks about is not a sin we are used to. It's simply what the heavenly dao considers to be sin, he talks about it several times. Out of his own lineage of sin. For me, the only parts I don't like about this novel are the Chinese names, but that's really irrelevant, it's just my preference. Another problem for me is that the people I want to die soon never die. (damn long chengt, died too fast, lingling is also a sucker who deserves to die, a retard with a huge ego, typical protagonist). Finally, it's my fear, it already has more than 1000 chapters and only recently a remnant of what the saint realm is. I can only imagine how many chapters this story will have. Maybe another 5000? I don't know if this is good or bad, see one piece as an example. It's relaxing to follow a story, but if it's too slow it's pretty boring. To conclude, if you've read all this and disagree, I can't do anything for you, after all, taste is like hair.... some people don't have.

I agree that the title is deceiving, but..man, the sin, in this case, is going against the celestial dao, which alchemy also does. As for the fights, I can understand that it gives the story a boost, but it's so well built that you realize that the protagonist doesn't have time to be bickering with every sucker that appears, he has to strengthen himself for what really matters.. ... the damnations of hell (Don't blame me if I'm wrong in this hell thing, I don't even remember the protagonist's name). So, starting to fight anyone and having an over-inflamed ego is not his personality. Who would maintain the same retarded personality of being a petty villain when on death's door??? definitely not the protagonist.

who would maintain the same retarded personality of being a petty villain when on death's door??? definitely not the protagonist.

man, the sin, in this case, is going against the celestial dao, which alchemy also does. As for the fights, I can understand that it gives the story a boost, but it's so well built that you realize that the protagonist doesn't have time to be bickering with every sucker that appears, he has to strengthen himself for what really matters.. ... the damnations of hell (Don't blame me if I'm wrong in this hell thing, I don't even remember the protagonist's name). So, starting to fight anyone and having an over-inflamed ego is not his personality.

He was living his life, practically, without fear, until the event occurs that changes his entire reality and makes him forced to get stronger and focus on his empowerment, instead of being silly intrigue with others. , or being a "villain". It's all part of character development.

will it reach cap 1000 and he hasn't started to cultivate yet? The story is moving too slowly, I understand that there is a psychological issue included, but I also understand that if you exaggerate too much, it only causes harm. So develop the story faster, author. please

This helps in the immersion, other authors do not seem to realize that placing a year close to the current year breaks the immersion, referring us to the present and makes us try to look for similarities between the book and reality, which, I think, should not be the purpose of the book, so, author, you are to be congratulated, in addition to a good writing, plot, you seem to know very well what you are doing. I'm glad some people take their work seriously.