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A_H_N_V1yrPostedHello author a very good story. The character design and world-building was very good. The story had various elements romance,mystery,action,adventure etc. I liked the character of Sarah. Hope you continue the good work and keep writing more books. P.S: However i have a few points that i would like to point out - It was too long and had too many characters, which led to fillers and made the story slice-of-life( not my favorite genre) - Many cliched plot devices were used repeatedly even after 1000 chapters. (aphrodisiac, all the men having an infatuated female working around them etc.) -Lastly i didn't like the character development of Aiden(my favourite). Initially Aiden and Sarah were a power couple but as the story progressed his character faded and he became a yes man to Sarah. He became like her subordinate and lost the charm he had in the first 300 chapters. Infact the other 2 males also became dull as the story progressed. -the ending was a bit anticlimactic If not for these issues i would have rated it a 5.
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And such accidents will continue to happen....[img=recommend]
She wished to touch him again, to confirm if she really does not mind touching him. But she didn't dare to reach out. 'Maybe when he gives me the suitcase back…' She thought that will be a good opportunity to touch him again 'by accident'. - A_H_N_V2yrReplied to Thrisha_Sathya
- A_H_N_V2yrCommentedCh 15 Chapter 14
- A_H_N_V2yrReplied to Anna_AnnalieseCh 25 C25
- A_H_N_V2yrCommentedDr. Snow balled his hands into fists while trying not to imagine Liz and Max spending the night together. When will he see her next time? He is not sure.
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- A_H_N_V2yrCommentedCh 16 Why Are You Here?
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NF is the MVP of this novel....
Nan Feng was instantly frightened. He stared at her abdomen and said in disbelief, "could it be that young madam is pregnant with a rabbit? " - A_H_N_V2yrCommented
lol
He was a little nervous. He took out a cigarette and lit it up. Thinking of how he smoked that night and almost got his mouth blown open by the firecrackers, he quickly threw the cigarette away. - A_H_N_V2yrCommented
man of culture...
At this moment, the peddler hurriedly ran over and said, "handsome, buy one for your wife? This hole is very fashionable. " - A_H_N_V2yrCommented
ROFL
"could it be that little Jin wants this? " Qiao Hanye asked thoughtfully. - A_H_N_V2yrCommented
the people around our ML are truly hilarious...
When he saw that her face was Pale and bloodless, she was clutching her chest and vomiting. Han Beicheng's first reaction was, 'it's only been a few days, and master has already gotten he lanjin pregnant? '? - A_H_N_V2yrCommented
ROFL
Immediately after, a magnetic voice sounded very pleasing to the ear. "Who said that if there was a next life, he would definitely have sex with the person with the surname Qiao in Jing Garden? " - A_H_N_V2yrCommentedCh 77 Chapter 77 was directly poked a few times by Shangguan Zhi
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The best assistant/friend ever...
A woman's Moan came from outside. Han Beicheng subconsciously stopped and stared at the door in astonishment. He said, "what is that sound? " - A_H_N_V2yrCommented
Was the He family traditionally into the manufacture of viagra or similar drugs...
Qiao Hanye's entire body was burning with unbearable heat. Two bowls of nourishing strong Yang soup entered his stomach, and every cell in his body was clamoring, as if in the next second, he was going to sow the spring sunshine of March in the dry winter season.