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Hello author a very good story. The character design and world-building was very good. The story had various elements romance,mystery,action,adventure etc. I liked the character of Sarah. Hope you continue the good work and keep writing more books. P.S: However i have a few points that i would like to point out - It was too long and had too many characters, which led to fillers and made the story slice-of-life( not my favorite genre) - Many cliched plot devices were used repeatedly even after 1000 chapters. (aphrodisiac, all the men having an infatuated female working around them etc.) -Lastly i didn't like the character development of Aiden(my favourite). Initially Aiden and Sarah were a power couple but as the story progressed his character faded and he became a yes man to Sarah. He became like her subordinate and lost the charm he had in the first 300 chapters. Infact the other 2 males also became dull as the story progressed. -the ending was a bit anticlimactic If not for these issues i would have rated it a 5.

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