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We don't even know what exactly she is offering. The deal makes no sense before Legion knows it.
The whole reason MC first meets Zhang Tian is BECAUSE he was imprisoned for stealing. What are you on about?
So basically speed of every modern bullet? Not that impressive
The situations you give are totally different from authors intention. Humans can't survive swimming in liquid nitrogen. Dipping your hand, just enough for Liedenfrost effect to work, is not the same as -100°C environment. There are not enough molecules density in space, to make heat transfer through thermal conduction effective. Therefore only way of losing heat is through radiation
It's nice, but didn't you state pretty clearly that such tricks don't work on anyone on Saints level and above?
Sounds a lot like Amazon union busting
*Vecnas It's plural
Last time he was nice to a girl, he almost died. Yeah I wouldn't take my chances if I were him.
Vessel or vassal?
Shouldn't the numbers go in increasing order? You start with a prototype Edition 1 and go however high you can.
What steel? He says, he needs metal container to make charcoal. Which is clearly bs
Most of the novel seems to just be thrown in an MTL. The names of characters change each paragraph (of course starting only from the paid part of the novel to not turn down any potential readers). The language used also gives a feeling of hastily translated chinese novel ("strange creatures", misplaced genders in pronouns, ability names and strange creature classification names often make no sense) World building is non-existent. People, things, concepts appear out of nowhere, and the MC seems to magically understand it from nowhere. Even with modern technology, it seems nobody knows about any modern methods of tracking. The way internet works is a bad joke (especially with the YouTube video). The power curve is so steep, that MC maxes out in about 50ish chapters. The most sophisticated abilities like switching bodies are given to him from the very start and require no extra effort. And after maxing out, he's almost unbeatable, as long as he doesn't reveal secrets to he's strength. And the MC himself is a damn trainwreck. Except for 2-3 characters (waifus) he kills everyone around. Every randomly encountered mage, every civilian. There's no consideration, no plotting. Because of his power there's no need for him to even try to be smarter.
Love the ridiculusness. But it would be even more terrifying, if he didn't address the audience all these times. Only talk to the driver when needed. Make them scared in silence.
Funky town If you know, you know
And just leave a trail of people halucinating, when he's actively hunted? Also creating a commotion when they scream in Fear?
Because every person has a limit after which, his mind would just break from trauma. Also he would need to possess means to hold such person captive.
I think, I read it in The Legendary Mechanic.