that's it? it's over like that?

so much pov, so much dragging unnecessary bs, you are losing readers

so much content in the three chapters man, u couldn't finish it properly,

well that was a little underwhelming

tch, another pov change and another yapp yapp yapp session, two chapter and half of both chapters were yap yap, the way it's going I doubt there will be harrys lilys and Dumbledores reaction regarding the first prize dairy for two chapters,

i hope harry won't be like I can't expose my abilities and all that, he should cement his place as the best of next generation

yep, just skipped half chapter

600 chapters ,then wait for breaks , then a chapter a day, now this, yeah I'm out, this is genuinely a good football novel but its inconsistent.

yep, after this the interest just dies down for many people, in this type of novel it doesn't matter even if the romance is introduced late,

nah man, anyone but Jennifer Lawrence,