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Lol i remember this motivatIonal speech

Well the reason i say cliche is every time an author adds in a girl it usually becomes a romance or harem and let me tell ya i’v seen SOO many of them I used to love those romance snd harems but i got bored of it because all of the people ive read it from did not do anything unique im not hating or anything but its my honest opinion that’s why i love gore bloodshed war AND FOOD 🤤 oh U can write what u want just use your imagination sounds cliche right but let me give u an idea When i say imagination i mean write down what ever u want dont make a story out of it yet u know why The fundamentals are Important Its like ingredients u know how chefs always follow the manual to make your food well the some chefs go byond that and make their own kind of food Make sure u add spices K... lol i meant like bloody Battles or little plots that makes a catalyst like what if your mc hmmmmmm OMG YES FOUND ONE mc go on a date with the girl he likes and apparently their was a guy that was semi obsessed When mc is not around she would get raped but never tell mc comes back and notices that her feelings are not genuine now plot is not done we need mc to fall a little more rage he impure In the rage side we need hIm to be a berserker Well i hope thats helpful do try Your imagination make it feel like your making a movie where u are the star and acter of your movie

Wow noice i see thats it i know u had something in plan good job 👏 im not done reading im just giving review i cant give Your book a name made taking time u worked hard in All i Can give an advice from my reading point of view is hope u dont put any cliches im Not saying u cant put some but something spicy I know some books that caught my attention im more into the gore the adrenaline the unexpected or plot diversion And i admire your persistence thats what makes a writer

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Hi its Me im reviewing im just going to say that the romance thing and the whole lovey dovey thing is a little weird Because the girl that the MC loves blushes just from him agreeing? The reason it confuses me is that does the girl likes him? or is she a hoe and is going with other guys and she thinks he wants some? i know i sound like im hating or something but just asking is the MC more focus on developing himself or romance

Hello just started reading so far its good In my opinion 👍

Stop complaining and read or shut Up and leave we dont need Your Kind of comments in here

K leave and STOP COMMENTING

What happened to his personality... its like all of a sudden he changed and no longer the same this is... 🥺 i really miss the old personality i hope he doesnt change 😭😢

Yall are so judgmental like u literally can just leave and SHUT YOUR MOUTHS ALL YALL HAVE SUCH HORRIBLE TASTE YET U JUDGE THIS AS BAD?? THE FUCK U TALKING ABOUT U CLICHE MOTHA FUCKERS LEAVE JUST LEAVE!!! FUCK I LOVE THIS MC HE HAS A PERSONALITY I REALLY REALL WANTED TO SEE BUT NOOOOOOOO PEOPLE LIKE U ARE FUCKING PERVERT WANTING A BISH OR HAREM AND ROMANCE SHIT U WEAK FUCKS CANT JUST LEAVE!!! FROM WHAT I SEE MOST OF THE MC IN THE OTHER STORYS ARE FUCKING PERVS AND PEOPLE THAT WANNA STICK THEIR DICK WHEREVER THEY WANTED THANK U AUTHER FOR WRITING SUCH A UNIQUE CHARACTER WITH AMAZING WRITING 🥰🙏💯🔥💯 Keep up the good work dont let these weak minded FOOLS make U stop writing because every story is Unique and non shall be what others want it to be but ✨U✨❤️

YES I LOVE U THE PERSON THAT WRITES THIS I ALWAYS WANTED A CHARACTER LIKE THIS AND I ALMOST GAVE UP BUT.. BUT U GAVE ME HOPE I LOVE U AND THE MC

WHY WHY ARE PEOPLE SO WEAK MINDED HE IS COOL I LOVE THIS MC

Mhm u are right For the person that ask The question that said it doesnt make sense it may sound confusing at first cuz we like to read things fast and not really comprehend it but understand what they are trying to say most of the time but what this person said is what your confused the most on. Dont worry i actually didnt understand it at first but i had to reread it to comprehend it.

Wow 😯 i thout it was good narration in my opinion I dont like useless talk like some novel or manga characters do. so this novel is meant for people like me and if u really dont like this novel pls Dont hate it because i dont want the person that write this magnificent novel to think it is horrible writing i dont hate the novelsthat i dont like so just chill and look at the bright side 😊

I love the explanations its so well narrated that i can Understand the situation and whats going on around that gives me the idea of what the world is like your novel is by far my most interest of whats to come because i could try and imagine whats happening [img=update]

Im so proud Of my MC he so excited to Train i love ❤️ this MC ALREADY 😊

I trust u people in the comments u understand how it Feels and u let it out