Vishal_Dulange
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Vishal_Dulange17dCommentedwhen did he reach B rank?
Hairo was frustrated, he had been training since he had turned 8 after finally convincing his grandfather and he didn't even unlock any new feature from the system and couldn't even obtain any new quest. He hoped that it would change when the plot of this world would begin since right now he was frustrated as ever since he reached B-Rank with his quirk it didn't just started affecting his mentality he was also taking 'Midnight Snacks' off the streets.- Vishal_Dulange17dCommented
on not in
"My lord." Boss Woif slide to a stop right before the throne where Shen sat majestically. He had glasses in his eyes and he was reading a long scroll. - Vishal_Dulange25dCommented
fear of the unknown not unknown of the fear
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running out of water?
I didn't dare to open my eyes being underwater. I just focused on the cool sensation that I was feeling. Every inch on my body is covered with water. - Vishal_Dulange1mthReplied to Corvos
😂😂
To prevent another "suicide" from death! - Vishal_Dulange2mthCommented
similar to shadow heart ❤️[img=recommend]
To put it in simpler terms. He decided to not make a core anymore, instead, he will just make his heart into one instead. - Vishal_Dulange3mthCommented
his-> her
Ye Zhiqu spoke to Ye Feng, but her tone was very gentle. - Vishal_Dulange4mthCommented
POV are mismatched.
As we pushed through the door, raging beats from speakers mounted to the ceiling rained down on me. A blast of amber light blinded me for but a moment, until my vicinity clamped down on my emotions. Yells, cheers, everything you could possibly hear in an underground fight club, was practically screamed at the top of somebody's lungs. - Vishal_Dulange4mthCommentedCh 43 The new beginning
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it should be kargas not viztar
So, instead of Viztar's neck, Kargas ducked below the arm that reached in his direction, shifted his serrated dagger-like sword to his other hand, and sliced Viztar's ankle. Viztar's green flames singed the very tips of Kargas' hair, but in exchange, Viztar landed a blow to one of Viztar's legs. If this continued, they could destabilize him. - Vishal_Dulange4mthCommented
when did they became friends?🤔
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sakuna?
Ability Description: Dismantle is an ability that allows the user to deliver an invisible slash within a radius of up to 20 meters. The level of penetration and the range of the ability can be increased depending on the user's mana. - Vishal_Dulange5mthCommented
what nonsense is this?
'It's good... since the main character is by my side, at least I'll be safe for now.' - Vishal_Dulange5mthCommented
He->She
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grammar error...
"Perhaps, has I become a Djinn?" She grits her teeth in self-hate at the unwanted development. - Vishal_Dulange6mthCommented
points are the same as before....
[Taoyun: 4122 points.] - Vishal_Dulange8mthCommented
why not make the fox into the spirit soul rather than just getting the spirit ring from the the leopard....
The Fox squatted down and looked at the soul ring on the Resplendent Golden Leopard, seemingly suggesting that Wang Feng could absorb it and it has no intention of fighting. Understanding the Fox's meaning, Wang Feng smiled and decided to proceed. He sat cross-legged, eyes focused on the soul ring as excitement filled his heart. - Vishal_Dulange8mthCommented
please proofread this lot of spell mistake.
'It seems like he loved her,' She thought while getting off the flying ship they were on. Indeed, Ling Han loved the princess. before his talent was made known to him or his clan, he and the princess were childhood friends, and as they grew up they were close. the betrayer came out of nowhere, it felt like a dream, and everything was just too hard to recall. what made things worse was after joining the sect, Ling Han found that the Ling Han had been destroyed, and every member was slaughtered due to them scheming for the thrown. - Vishal_Dulange8mthCommented
jeans? in a cultivation world????...
Ling Han was called onto the stage, and there everyone watched a young man wearing a jacket, long jeans, and a blindfold stepping onto the stage. everyone watched this scene in shock, such clothing was considered mortal clothing. such clothing limited an expert movement and brought no enhancement, other than looking cool, they were dumb. instantly, everyone's impression of Ling Han dropped, it dropped even more seeing that eased smile. - Vishal_Dulange8mthCommented
jeans? in a cultivation world????...
Ling Han was called onto the stage, and there everyone watched a young man wearing a jacket, long jeans, and a blindfold stepping onto the stage. everyone watched this scene in shock, such clothing was considered mortal clothing. such clothing limited an expert movement and brought no enhancement, other than looking cool, they were dumb. instantly, everyone's impression of Ling Han dropped, it dropped even more seeing that eased smile.