Why make a fish a call? Was it possible to summon a Mermaid? Which can scout in the water + water jutsu and turn into a completely human and espionage on the type of a simple civilian girl and 3 into an ordinary fish, there are a lot of variations

Фанфик превратился в дно ибо вот все у гг хорошо все спланировано но типо аджука эго разоблачает такой бред блять ей богу[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Автор полная дура заставляет страдать им под предлогом мол не все может быть розово ? Блять серьезно?!! Это насколько стали трусливыми авторы что не могут сделать им счастливой сильной и чтоб у неё был стальной стержень? Но нет блять давай добавим драмы страдании и издевательство над гг , автора ты мазахиска?? Мне жаль будущею- будущего парня - девушку если станет встречаться с тобой такой дурой

Самый худший фанфик гг мог быть имбой но автор сделал слабым итд фу , зачем тогда оправдываться мол ему 5 лет и он слаб ибо уже достало где гг слабак и он не может изменить сюжет

The top fan fiction on climbing in the shadows cool scenes style like in the anime Climbing in the shadows, in general, burn on, greetings from a fan from Russia

Do you love Yuri as much as I do? If yes, are there any interesting fan fiction about Yuri?

The author is you down!!! Why kill the ego of parents?!! Burn you in hell, you bastard, what does it have to do with eternal so that you are fucking tortured and torn apart!! 1 star to you asshole!! And no excuses will help you , ugh on you

You know , I'm from Russia, God , I liked your fan fiction , everything is beautifully written, a good plot and narration, continue in the same spirit, may the bear with vodka and balalaika come with you

cool fan fiction , it 's especially funny to watch the main characters who are lustful in their thoughts but fail and get a green hat every time

Я даже ничего объяснять не буду, ибо ещё один который мазохист и издевается над гг передумывает ему супер пупер хуй знает от куда то врагов богов и прочее ерунду , нет чтоб гг добился мечты и был ии , мы будем нести хрень

You better get some more fan fiction crimson fate lol

You hesitated with this unnecessary drama , then Daphne lost her memory , although she should understand that he does not answer calls at all and went not to twist novels but to fix a magic wand , but no , Daphne should lose her memory because the sadistic motherfucker author wished so , then Martina 's family , I hope Axel will take revenge on them after repairing the wand and fuck that Martina's ego girlfriend if he forgives, then he is a rag and a fucking coward, and even the question is, even if she has lost her memory for a long time, she should at least read an article about Axel's past, but the author didn't even write it, as if he specifically forgot and yes the system?!!! Are you fucking serious? Chester should help, etc. and you do so that Axel was a slave to the system forever, with what I used to like fan fiction because he was logical from weak to strong, the system was normal and not like a slave right now and which overstates the requirements, for example, save the school from the aerer duper of the enemy and get no fuck, that is, the risk does not correspond to the reward in fact He's risking his skin for nothing so I'm giving 1 star

Author san , I hope after saving Martina and beating the Mikhailovs , you will give Axel a normal damn rest !!! For the trials were constantly hesitating, Missy for salvation, as if you are not a normal author but a sadist who is content with the suffering of others, including gg, 2 I hope he will take revenge on Martina's family for their crap that they decided to substitute Axel, fuck that Martina is an ego friend and they say they will fix the wand, no no and no , they have to suffer, eye for eye, tooth for tooth, as they say, well, if you don't, then your gg can be used as a rag for wiping your feet, they will forgive you and Axel will find Over reasons and excuses

Постоянные проблемы и автор не дают акселю не отдыха нормального нет даже любви , а где родители гг вообще не понятно то либо умерли либо хз где, даже если будут живы я бы на месте гг послал их

When will Bell stop being dumb and stupid as a cork? Yes, I understand the person was born into Bella, I promised I wouldn't be stupid like Bell, but still like the main character Damachi is just as stupid and stupid

Will there be a sequel by the author san

Rest in peace poor kraken

Will the author San continue at all or not wait at all ??

You hesitated with your ads, maybe you will do normal chapters and not waste a chapter on useless ads? Who needs it and will give you a stone of strength xs what kind of a beggar are you

Ты этот фанфик будешь продолжать писать или бросать мне эго?? Ибо очень интересно он жаль что такие лентяи как ты и дураки бросают такие творения