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Poor grammar and lots of mistakes in writing. The story started out fine, but it follows the path of everyone one else but mc is dumb,therefore mc smart. other than a few dumb side characters here and there, it's a good read if you want to pass time. sometimes author tend to focus, a bit too much on side characters
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which one is it
A soft gasp of shock resounded as the crystal orb revealed a faint, chaotic crack on its surface. For a long moment, silence reigned supreme until words were finally spoken. "Little girl, your fate shifted?" - DaoistLad2yrReplied to pea_one
yep ,but not with evelynn
He wanted to become stronger before having a child, at least before entering the Eighth Stage, he had no idea of giving birth to a child through Evelynn or any woman to speak of. - DaoistLad2yrReplied to animelover1477
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where was it stated
"The demons drank their blood, consumed their meat, chewed their bones— all sorts of horrifying things. Fortunately, almost as though the heavens sent him during the Nine Heavens' darkest times, a certain individual created techniques that allow cultivators to finally fight back the demons, and that person was the Divine Paragon, Founder of the Demon Sealing Clan." - DaoistLad2yrCommentedCh 45 Chapter 45: Gu Changge’s Real Face; Not Even God Will Shelter You!
- DaoistLad2yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue
- DaoistLad2yrCommentedCh 1 Su Yang
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Yeah, he's still stupid
Emery quickly interrupted the prince and said "Tell me what happened!. What did you do to her?!" Try as he might, Emery couldn't keep the rage from bubbling through his question. - DaoistLad2yrPosted
The depicted world is really good, the progression of the story is interesting, the only thing that I feel cringe is the MC. After soooo many experiences, I still feel he's a naive fool, trusting everyone one here and there. Author, why must you make look like an idiot, he don't need to be cold blooded, at least make him a bit more ruthless, he's a magus and still holding onto that stupid Knight's honor and stuff, at this rate it's really hard to see him struggle so much and still trouble comes all along. I get it that MC facing trouble makes him grow, but atleadt give him a break sometimes. If it goes on like this MC not gonna get a breather anytime soon. Give him a plot armor or something, make it interesting.
- DaoistLad2yrCommentedCh 32 Chapter 32
- DaoistLad2yrCommentedCh 1447 Loret Empress Sheds Tears
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