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The depicted world is really good, the progression of the story is interesting, the only thing that I feel cringe is the MC. After soooo many experiences, I still feel he's a naive fool, trusting everyone one here and there. Author, why must you make look like an idiot, he don't need to be cold blooded, at least make him a bit more ruthless, he's a magus and still holding onto that stupid Knight's honor and stuff, at this rate it's really hard to see him struggle so much and still trouble comes all along. I get it that MC facing trouble makes him grow, but atleadt give him a break sometimes. If it goes on like this MC not gonna get a breather anytime soon. Give him a plot armor or something, make it interesting.

Earth's Greatest Magus

Avan

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thank u for the review. which chapter have u red till?