Gotta love it, keep up the good work. I really like how you’ve turned homelander into Superman in all but name

Certain warnings would’ve been nice, also tf kids don’t ha breasts

So you like the gang of human traffickers and exploiters, nice I guess

Really solid start, there are some grammatical errors, but they don’t really detract much from the story. Really like where this is going and I hope you can continue it.

Still about as useful as a screen door in a submarine

Honestly, the story is very interesting, the grammar however makes you feel this was written by a 6th grader

This has to be the first story I read on this site that leaves me wanting for more. Well done, hope you can keep uploading

Ah akavili

I would just discard dark magician girl. That doesn’t go with his decks meta

You don’t need to put the name of the speaker in front of every phrase ._. It makes it unreadable

No, just no this shouldn’t be allowed here

Honestly read about 30 chapters in and the MC is just another dumbass that thinks with his dick 60% of the time, the idea of a barebones syste was well executed and the grammar is good. But that’s about it for this story, solid skip

Disgusting, that’s his biological mother

Did he say loli, ew

No

MC has the personality of an annoying brat and the dialog is a bit hit or miss tbh

Wouldn’t a kettle be better?

All shall praise the wife, for being the voice that gave us another chapter 🤣🤣🤣

I don’t know if it’s me, but I can feel the quality of the narrative going down, I feel the author should take a rest if real life if getting in their way of writing

Lessgoooooooo