Dropped?

Dropped?

Bro, if you really find that revision offensive, delete it, but not everyone likes how the novel develops and that's fine. If everyone liked everything we do there would be no need for reviews at all, if you find something good in the reviews you learn something if you don't find it useful you ignore it and if you find it offensive you delete it, don't give it more importance than you think Got it and keep up the good work. I love your novel, I always wanted to read BTTH to learn more about that world that is one of the most common in light novels but for some reason I get bored every time I start reading it, through your novel I can say that you have taken something that is Well, you have improved it and managed to make us all enjoy it and every day we look forward to reading it from what I can say that it is what I would call a very good Fanfic. If someone doesn't like it, that's fine, if they really don't like it, stop reading and that's it, I urge you to continue and finish your novel, since many fanfics remain unfinished, which is unfortunate, regards 🤗

I just read that review, I don't think it's bad, maybe a little risqué. The novel evidently had a change, before it focused on the personal development of the MC and the simulator, which I think is perfectly fine, and then it moved to focus on other characters and world development, which is especially good for some like me who don't read BTTH. I personally think that the first part of the novel was more interesting and I would like to see more simulations but I understand that if you do too many simulations you will neglect the development of the characters and it is also possible that the novel will not last much longer due to receiving rewards better and better and I finished the novel for an accelerated development of the MC

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I want more information about the shadow clones training

Dropped?

When the next chapter?

In the scarce 18 chapters that I have read so far I can say that it is one of my favorite ASOIAF fanfics, the plot is interesting and it uses the well-known context of ASOIAF very well. Writing: I quite liked the writing, the author has taken as a model the style of GRRM himself, developing multiple perspectives well linked to each other update: it has been regular with at least one chapter so far. development of the story: The story has been interesting, the small changes that have been made to give rise to Daeron and save Joanna have given rise to a whole change in the world that becomes more and more interesting, if there is something to criticize it is that the changes of perspective are not expressly indicated, which means that a lot of attention is needed so as not to lose the thread of the story. character design: In this aspect the author has performed very well in portraying the personality present in the ASOIAF books while Daeron himself has a unique and well-defined personality, with relationships established in a logical and very original way for most of the characters. fanfics that we are used to. world development: This is probably the worst aspect of the novel, to the point that the places where the characters are are not usually described and the author assumes that readers know the world context, although it is not necessary that a fanfic be I concentrated especially on the construction of the world, since all this information is in the original work, by giving information about the context of the characters in each scene, it makes the readers deviate from the development of the plot. This review is to encourage the author to continue showing us the adventures of Daeron until the end as well as giving advice on how to add POV indications as well as a greater effort in the construction of the scenarios for the construction of the world, I love this fanfic I hope be helpful (this review is done by google translate, since my writing in english is very bad, please forgive grammatical aspects)

what happened to cersei and daeron?

Ahhhhh I need more, everyone hating Rhaegar

He is a war god should use Spear, isnt?