This whole chapter it's just wrong... I get that Morpheous hurt David but still, can they stop talking about ending his life?! It's killing me T.T I'm sure there's a rational explanation to why that happens to him and they are just choosing the easy way out and it frustrates me x.x

Can she just refrain herself from saying the "darkness inside of him" and think with her head, for once? She is a smart girl and it's Morpheous we're talking about, for crying out loud!

She'll never tell him a thing nor will she ask directly about the doubts she has... She's too proud to do so unfortunately :/

A***w.... Was it just a dream?? It didn't happen?! This ship is playing hard to get geez....

Him not meeting the real Mrs Wan, it can't be good... This surely will come back later to bite Han's butt..

Sha la la la la la, don't be scared You got the mood prepared Go on and kiss the girl! Sha la la la la la, don't stop now Don't try to hide it how You want to kiss the girl!

Don't worry about it! It happens, even to the best of us! Reviewing your work after its done once or twice before publishing, it helps!

Yeah, after reading a bit ahead, I came to an understanding that, that 'human' was actually a demon 😅

Hello! I've read your book until the very end and I would like to give you my review, though not asked, and leave a few notes on a few things that I believe I can be improved in the future. I'm really liking the story so far, the plot is quite interesting, confusing at some parts but nevertheless a good achievement, and the fact that it meddles with the mystical world, it gets me stuck on the screen. I still have a lot of questions regarthing the motives behind the hunt of our heroine and how does human bonds play the part, but I'm sure they will be answered in the next chapters. On to the next point, I don't know if it's related or not but, Raphael and Crowley reminds me of the series 'Good Omens', and I can't exactly stop my mind to go to those characters. It's cool because their personalities here displayed, it kind of matches. I'm interested in seeing how she'll grow and how will their bond strengthen. Can't wait to read about their adventures. Finally, I just wanna brought to your attention that you need to be more attentive to misspelling and grammatical errors, it difficults the reading greatly. But that's my personal opinion. Also, I advise you to better hint when your changing perspectives, I mean, when you're changing the first subject of the dialogue, do it so we can understand that thoughts and the dislogues it's from, per example, are from the queen and not from any other character. Doing it poorly, it gets confusing and becomes a demotivating factor. And that's all! Keep up with the good work, you're on the right track, my fellow writer!

Now, I'm really confused 😅

*Payback I sense some humorous dynamic with this duo!

*that, *not and *plug Do I sense the beginning of a forbidden romance between that angel and that human? hmmm~ could it be?

I'm just bringing to your attention a few grammatical mistakes: "Difficult" and "Feel". I'm loving the story so far! Please continue the good work! ^^

Pior girl... I feel for her...

This is awesome! I'm loving it!

The storyline, it got me good! My favorita so far!

I'm intrigued! Can't wait to see what you have in store for the novel's plot! Keep the good work!

Hm... hello! A question... when you mean 'creatures', you mean something like Vampires, Demons, etc? What's a Nyx creature? Is it like someone who can control the elements? How many are there in your novel's universe? Thank you!