The BEST girl and I'm willing to die on that hill

Hehe

No if it happens to Ed, I just want mah boi to be happy

Would've been cool but sadly I think this is dropped

Interesting Very Fuckin Interesting You have my interest

That face bro

I love how this is the only stat with comments on it

You gotta admit project zomboid is lit

Can someone translate this to English? Can someone translate this to English? Can someone translate this to English?

Abort the mission

Okay that's a cool one Got an idea not sure if you'll like it but how about rituals that remove that limitation by turning into something not human (this is kinda like really really end game) if you plan to continue writing with the same mc

Then you might want to lower the initial challenge since his stats are a bit low maybe 30-50 of each so that you can pace it a bit more

This is your story you can change whatever you want. The Potter verse is not really complete it has been expanded but it's not yet completely explored, you can use that to your advantage by expanding more upon the world

The review is a bit low for now since you're just starting, but aside from a few things I like the way you write. The character hasn't been fleshed out so I'm not gonna critique that much same with the story, and now for the world background i suggest you play around with it to truly show your story

All in all decent start so I'm gonna go give this a review

The (And it will increase as the host progresses) kinda messes with me not sure why though

Hmm it's a decent start I could see a few ways this could improve such as using brackets like [System/Stats], {For temporary stats like buffs}, and maybe bullets • for skills

Can I suggest something? Why not use (') for thoughts and (") for dialogue, makes it easier to distinguish

Might want to shift this to Nigel since it's been three years