Darnelljoe
If no harem has 1000 fans, I am one of them. If no harem has only one fan, that is me. If no harem has no fans, I am not alive. If the world is against no harem, I am against the world.
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Darnelljoe18hPostedAlthough the story has so far been close to the canon plot with some differences, the way it is written keeps you interested in reading more. There is one thing that some people might not like and that is that the MC is very heroic. With the limited chapters, I am still unsure on how far he is willing to go. There is one thing that I believe this story sucks at and that is the romance. I feel it is extremely rushed, nor did I see any proper development between them. I also did not expect the physical aspect to be so sudden. Don’t get me wrong, it’s not that I don’t believe such a thing can happen, but I don’t believe it to be plausible considering her character. I understand that the story is somewhat AU, but it just seems too oc. One thing that I really enjoyed is the dynamic between the MC and Bakugo. I feel like there was more thought put into their relationship.
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How convenient.
"I've been wanting to do that for a while now," she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper. "I just... I never had the courage. But seeing you out there... it made me realize that life is too short to wait for the perfect moment." - Darnelljoe3dCommentedCh 17 The USJ Incident [1]
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How did he come to that conclusion?
Thirteen leaned in, whispering something I couldn't quite catch. But I did see them hold up three fingers, and my mind raced with the implications. "Could All Might have a time limit?" I muttered to myself. - Darnelljoe1mthReplied to Mr_Gone_Rogue
Nah, it adds flavor.
This book has been deleted. - Darnelljoe2mthReplied to Tobi_One_Kenobi
The comment wasn’t meant to be serious you dimwit.
"Subject 0x has exceeded every record we set for him. It has shown 0 signs of deterioration to drug R7-0x1. Immune to all types of infections, viruses, bacteria... Just think of any type of diseases you can imagine and he will resist them," Doctor Jones replied, walking toward me before pressing his finger against my cheek. "R7-0x1 is a combination of Earth's most deadly diseases... Yet Subject 0x lives... His regeneration capabilities are even thousand... No, a million times greater than that of Logan, yet there are no signs of X-Genes in his body." - Darnelljoe3mthReplied to nikita_vdovin
He’s a immune to death
"Subject 0x has exceeded every record we set for him. It has shown 0 signs of deterioration to drug R7-0x1. Immune to all types of infections, viruses, bacteria... Just think of any type of diseases you can imagine and he will resist them," Doctor Jones replied, walking toward me before pressing his finger against my cheek. "R7-0x1 is a combination of Earth's most deadly diseases... Yet Subject 0x lives... His regeneration capabilities are even thousand... No, a million times greater than that of Logan, yet there are no signs of X-Genes in his body." - Darnelljoe4mthReplied to Sir_Squirrel
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You keep on yapping bro.
Nolan nodded, giving Mark a reassuring smile. "Yeah, Mark, we're okay. Just taking it one step at a time." He motioned for Mark to join them, and together, the three of them shared a simple meal. - Darnelljoe7mthCommentedCh 2 New Day - New Company
- Darnelljoe8mthReplied to Kamikaze_Eagle
It’s a simple “I got contacts now.”
"Damn..." he muttered in astonishment, marvelling at the sheer amount of detail his sharp hazel eyes could discern from his surroundings. Every particle of dust suspended on a sunbeam, the rust on the machines, the ants that crawled on the wall - everything was so crisp. - Darnelljoe8mthReplied to Kamikaze_Eagle
Bros never heard of contacts
"Damn..." he muttered in astonishment, marvelling at the sheer amount of detail his sharp hazel eyes could discern from his surroundings. Every particle of dust suspended on a sunbeam, the rust on the machines, the ants that crawled on the wall - everything was so crisp. - Darnelljoe8mthReplied to DaoistwOqXyh
Yeah bro, because that’s super easy to do…
Harry's face lit up and he smacked Grant's shoulder which made him slightly wince. His skinny body really wasn't in the best of shape. - Darnelljoe8mthReplied to DaoistwOqXyhCh 1 Nonsensical Biology
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- Darnelljoe10mthCommentedCh 3 CH-3: Failed Recruitment
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Yup, this is out of character.
"So you read his mind and came here? That's rude and a violation of privacy, Mr.Xavier!" May stood up with her hands clenched. - Darnelljoe10mthPosted
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I don’t hate harem if it’s well done, I just prefer no harem.
As an Arab, I take it upon myself to educate readers on the appropriate way to manage a harem, as well as how to write a successful harem story. I intend to avoid the pitfalls of poorly written harem stories that incorporate elements such as yuri and NTR. - Darnelljoe10mthCommented
You know muscle is jiggly too, it’s only hard when you flex.
However, hearing mom tell her story of how she was once a soldier last night, I couldn't help but look at her current appearance. I'm sure she must've been pretty strong and athletic back in the day, but now… all of that muscle has melted away into a soft, jiggly mass of flesh