DreamSeeker_Lord
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Maybe it was so fast that Kurama didn't get to see him haushasuhusha
But it was day for me... (´;ω;`)
Ah, I see, so you aren't a man of culture.
not really, this is actually freedom to bullshit around as much as he want, because no one would actually know the truth.
is everyone there midgets?
My disappointment is unmeasurable, and my day is ruined.
I know how you feel, but don't let it bother you, just keep up with your job, I can't say it is my favorite fic, but I have liked it so far. (although I would have really liked if the mc was into guys since he/she is now a woman, but I understand it won't happen) Anyway, good luck Author-San, I will be reading this fic until you drop it or finish it.
****, I literally fell on the ground because of this paragraph, I almost thought he had become a real woman and would kiss him or something.
I think this isn't realistic at all, all those kids training to be shinobi are probably way more trained then even the adults in real life, after all they have the magic factor influencing their bodies, an example of this is wall walking, the amount of strength one would need to keep it self in a standing position like Kakashi and others do all the time is extremely high.
As a fellow author, I feel like I should comment on the issue here, if you are going to write a first person story, don't suddenly change the point of view to that of third person omniscient view, it doesn't make sense and it breaks the immersion specially because, it changes how the reader approaches the characters in a unnatural way. If needed, I suggest you to watch some of reedsy and quotodian videos on YouTube, to get some tips on how to write.
Doesn't matter, Hiruzen only sneaked peaks on important characters, not useless girls whose only purpose was to have a crush on the antagonist making the protagonist feel bad.
I know it isn't really a woman, but the body is, so I count it as female lead.
I don't know who the author is, but I need to at least say a few things to you. First of all, I would like to praise you for your original (never saw something similar, so I think it is original) idea and courage to try and write something like that, Sakura indeed receives too much hate, and I don't think she deserves it. Second, whether or not you are a male, I would also like to praise you for writing about a female main character, it isn't like there isn't books with woman as protagonists, or that I don't like books with male leads, but I feel like this kind of battle oriented stories could have more female leads, since it can give you another perspective on themes we are already used to. Third and last, I obviously don't know what you have written yet, since I still need to read, but I want to wish you luck, and I hope that you can finish this story since it could be a great source of inspiration for many authors in a way that it can make them leave their safe zones if this story is well written. Good luck Author-San, I'm putting my hopes on you!
amazing.
who said you a fic needs to be part of canon if you want to write a story that is part of that world? If you think like that, then you should rethink what it means to write a fanfic, I'm not writing a copy of MHA, I'm writing my own story based upon that universe, exactly like how I'm writing my Harry Potter fic that happens 300 hundred years into the future.