Review Detail of Spartan_Wolf in GDXS: Laws of Menace

I really liked the concept of the story. Seeing alternate realities in a story is very rare on webnovel. I honestly haven’t seen any of them until now, when I read this. The characters seem interesting, and the alternate versions of the mc as well. This story isn’t a sci-fi story, even though it has alternate realities in it. Instead, it has magic. And magic really tickles my fancy. But there is a major spelling and grammar problem in the beginning few chapters of the story, that honestly made it really hard to read. But other than that, it’s an interesting concept for a story. Thought there is also flaws with the flow of the story, which could easily be fixed if there is more explanations in the beginning chapters. That’s my honest review. Keep on writing author! I’m sure this story will be a banger if done right!