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rare_swordsman_543dPostedi never wrote a review before .... i mean never, even i like the fanfic......and i would have not wrote one if i didnt have checked this fic, thinking that it would be a decent translation of some mid tier chinese sports fanfic ( i have read some that not xenophobic and not all about nationalism). but after read first 4 chapter i was compelled to tell you that this a children fairy tale, were the prince get all the help he need and have no character development ( a lot of thing dont make sense and neither author try to explain them, about the money he get ,the shares he bought, what a bout the government agencies, does it not raise red flags if a person suddenly come up with 70b pounds out of no where?). pls if u rewrite the story and correct the plothole ...i will re-evaluate my review, cause i dont want my girst serious review to be dogshit.
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seriously..... i was waiting for the time he will tell his name to issac
"My name is Isaac Netero." Saying this, the man leapt out of the hole. - rare_swordsman_542mthCommented
sounds like a pokemon's name.....
"-Gelasius," I said with a sharp grin, "So, I believe it's time for you to go home?" I said my tone going smoother and less manic. - rare_swordsman_542mthCommented"Whoaaaa~" Po said in awe, "Is that why you are so nice now? You ate all your hatred and wrath?"
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i was so worked up by the speech that i dont notice it was about harem XD!!
"Do you have a problem with someone? Fight! Do you like someone? Ask them out! Do you want a harem? Work for it! You will stumble, fall, and get hurt as you move forward. I can't promise you will achieve your dream or even have one girl, let alone many. All I will promise is that you will have none if you stay still." - rare_swordsman_543mthCommented
kuzan's one of the coldest moments...pun intended
"Ara Ara ... Excuse me, young man. Could you step aside? He is my ... colleague." - rare_swordsman_543mthCommented
dear author..........i dont think it is possible to heal mid battle if do not know RCT ....or he have a innate curse technique of healing........or he have soooo much cursed energy ( almost unlimited ) that it automatically become positive energy .....like when hikari hit a jackpot in hiss domain expansion
In a split second I dodged the monster's attack before countering. As the counter hit, I could feel my wounds slowly healing. But even better a spark of lighting sprayed out of the monster. - rare_swordsman_543mthCommented
hmm..... achha(really) ......... theek hai(its ok)
Whenever she paused, I'd reply by raising my eyebrows, saying "Really?" "What happened next?" Of course, that changed when I caught a glimpse of something bad happened, "Woah." It's a skill developed when you have people liking to talk a lot around you. - rare_swordsman_543mthCommented
i always imagine him like this Shawn Michael segment
Kadoc pursed his lips before sighing and hurrying over to his fellow Master, "I don't think I should but... Are you alright?" He should have seen it coming, but well, normal people didn't just punch cars and get to walk away without any injuries! - rare_swordsman_543mthCommented
i'm in state of dilemma ....i dont know what to do ....... be happy or cringe....70% happy....25% cringe due to hindi name not sounding good in english sentence........5% can not describe the emotion
"I'm Mahendra Bahubali, prince of the Maheshmati kingdom. As for what I'm doing here, well I was actually planning to visit the capital city Rajapura but I didn't expect to hear battle sounds coming from here. I followed the sounds out of curiosity and ended up here. " - rare_swordsman_543mthCommented
vishwaroop of sri krishna..............i think he will able to know about him if he see him in this form
"Alright son, I can't stay here for a long time as it will disturb the balance of this world. Now I will reincarnate you in the Mahabharat Kaal. And one more thing, your memories of this world will only recover after you reach adulthood ( 18 years old). And the system will also help you hide from the prying eyes of other gods including my avatar Krishna. " - rare_swordsman_543mthCommented
what will happen when lord krishna take his true form.......will he still not able to see him?
"Alright son, I can't stay here for a long time as it will disturb the balance of this world. Now I will reincarnate you in the Mahabharat Kaal. And one more thing, your memories of this world will only recover after you reach adulthood ( 18 years old). And the system will also help you hide from the prying eyes of other gods including my avatar Krishna. " - rare_swordsman_544mthCommented"Which is why they are doing this. They know exactly who you are. Now suck it up."
- rare_swordsman_544mthCommentedIt had honed Romonus into a powerful young man, but it came at a cost. He had become cold, and distant, with a pride that burned hot. His maids had more than once come to him saying they were terrified of Romonus.
- rare_swordsman_544mthCommented(Image here)
- rare_swordsman_544mthCommented(His Outfit.)
- rare_swordsman_544mthReplied to A_Real_Werewolf234(His Outfit.)
- rare_swordsman_544mthCommentedRomonus even got to see his older brother Sirzechs and his wife Grayfia Lucifuge which was sad. He had hoped like in some fanfics she was not his wife, but that was not the case. Sad days ahead, but Romonus was not about to betray his new brother by fucking his girl.
- rare_swordsman_544mthCommented"Lucas," he finally rumbled, his voice thick with grudging respect, "that was... something else. I've seen actors chew scenery before, but you, boy, you swallowed the damn canyon and spat it out raw."
- rare_swordsman_544mthCommentedThe taxi driver chuckled at Lucas's words and replied, "Haha, my dream is not so big. I know my limits. My dream is for one day to become a driver for some big shot..." He paused and added, "A big shot like the Godfather."