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I really like your way of progressing the plot and the overall direction this story is going. But grammar and writing can use some help. Try helping tools like QuillBot for example. You can paste your text there and it will greatly help you improve writing quality. Thank you for the chapter updates
Is he wrong tho
Great ff, one of my favorites for sure. .........................., ........................................................................
No Harem would be appreciated!
Author-san doing my job now! Well, I'm not complaining
A very good and consistent work. I like the writing quality,one of the best on this app, also like the characters,they don't seem fake and feel like real people in the real world,they don't make constant stupid decisions and always provide the work with personality. Their background is also quite well-explained and logical. Overall,Definitor loves this work!
That's really sad!
Yes!
adios - goodbye