DaoistNightDweller
I am but a lost wanderer in the dark, for I dwell in the darkest pits of unspeakable secrets. If thou secrets is spoken It shall unleash the shame of a thousand men.
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Thanks for the story. I only ended up here when I read all of the MHA fanfics on this site, and I dropped halfway through because of the emotional ups and downs and other stuff but I came back and enjoyed it nonetheless. Author, I don’t know if you’ll read this but I think you should write your own stories besides fanfiction. Your syle is more suited for it, in my opinion. This fanfic may not have been popular, but I at least liked it and recognize the effort put in it. This might be late but thank you for creating such a wonderful story. If you ever write a book, give me a heads up please because I would like to read it.
What happens when Aizawa use Erasure on him? Does he turn into a cat since bus base form is a cat or does it just turn off his strength and electricity ? Also what happens when he transforms ? Does he have to be naked like Yoruichi or does the clothes transform with him? To be honest there are a lot of unexplained relevant matters in the atory that might turn into a plot hole later. What’s up with his parents though. I mean you wrote it like they love him so much even though he was a cat and now that he is human did they suddenly lose interest ? No matter how smart he is, that doesn’t change the fact that he is six and that his mother letting him live alone is out pf character . Why am I even so invested in a fanfic...
Plot hole.
I know it's traditions but...
Writing Quality is good. The author is improving. Story Development is also good. Only fighting scenes are boring so adding flashbacks are cool. Character Design is good. Katsuki Bakugo as a gangster is fresh. Updating Stability is trash. World Background is gud. Overall you are gud but please update more.
I think there's something wrong with the way you wrote 12:00 pm
Hmm... Okay...
Make enough money... Ahem! Theoretically speaking, by unit of measurement using a cheeseburger that costs 1$, how many cheeseburgers can you buy per month or week. And 2nd, how are you able to earn said cheeseburgers. Just asking for a friend. And this friend has a part-time job modeling. Ahem! Just asking for a friend.