Everything went well until chapter 18 and 19. I'd recommend the author to simply remake those two since they make no sense at all. However, it is your fanfic so feel free to do whatever. Otherwise, the characters seems fine (except ch.18-19), the writing is good and well the world background is MHA. Overall, great work (except ch.18-19) and good luck :)
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