Poorly executed

5 star WQ 5 star US 1 stars for the rest. You stretched the story way too thin for personallity settings. Then took a nosedive into the abyss for world setting I dont even know anything by chapter 20 and why it happened, plot holes are massive, while no real progress even more confusing the way you did the transmigration is just confusing and makes no sense. the story didnt pull me in the first 20 chapters sorry. I cant read this.

You also need to consider that all the reviews beside me are probably one person and the same.

I have a clue at whats going on but this seems to be a petty try at avoiding plagiarism as far as I am reading or avoiding chatgpt detector. chapters orders are scrambled all over the place, sentence structure are broken into multiple spaces some sentences are even scrambled in the sane chapters in a wrong order. Chapter titles too are a fat chance. I would give this a read since its not really anything special, this is ragtag plagiarism at best.

Actually nevermind cant continue reading anymore quality is beyond garbage at this point I am sorry. for all his intelligence this might be the dumbest MC I have seen.

Thats one stupid way to do it. i am proud of you. He had inventory to store that ring.

Aye

besides massive info dumbs that I skipped through from chapter 300 to 350+ or something this book gave me everything I ever wanted to read about to enjoy my time, the MC tends to overpowered in his own right but compared to everyone else? Hes so far behind in terms of age that its a tall task to catch up without exploding into pieces or taking set backs. The MC keeps on suffering set backs that he learns from and covers up the next time it happens again which is realistic. This point is often absent from every other book, where the MCes actually have a brain missing and tend do some stupid $h1t and keep doing it every single time. So much I wanna say but just give the book a read its awsesome beyond reason! Also I want a a talented harem headed by Eva! :<

The best book in the last couple of months so far, great job author. If there was a lacking point it was the lack of a talented harem to help him in other ways such as eve in her own way but as of the lastest chapter with the mage arc I can see it finally happened (I hope)

Dude did you dumb all his IQ in the dumbster?!

You forced flaws, never got a fixer with those points, and made a big massive f up in the approach method.

You really butchered it. What a waste.

Man I would wish there was a main character for titania and sofia at least, this will just make this novel sub par and everytime I look back it would be with disgust.

I would think with this mesh of genres a harem would be the only result which I am totally supporting.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Chapter 60+

I Figured out it would be the case from chapter already dropped

The story was well thoughts, concept of strength and power are well done but I feel like every chapter is a rush, Too many things are happening at once while the plot armor of him having knowledge of strength that arent accessible to others is just pure fantasy since even if he is ahead in terms of knowledge every introduction of new way of gaining power should be a butterfly effect. Can you Imagine 5-10 People with iphones and the rest of the world without them? Delusional, Something Has to Happen, And in no way its Good to either sudes. This feels oddly one sided, extremely so if I may, I also see bo suspense what so ever in the story, I read to chapter 60+ and I dont like I am enjoying it anymore, Since I already know how things will progress, just repeat the prev 60 chapters And paraphrase, Flush, rinse and repeat.

Grammar is Flawless but otherwise this story feels like some 12 year olds wet dream. most of whats going on makes absolute no logic, MC goIng left and rIght thinking with his pants while othEr characters thinks its fine. aristocratic woman offering her self like a blow doll. This is absolutely freaking horrid.