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Kurum170k124k13mthCommentedI Love this story but the last 3 chapters were of no use as the info dump had no effect on the story as a whole it would have been better if you had just made it into a few paragraphs instead of 3 whole chapters as I skipped the chapters and had no discrepancies with the story going forward.
Chapter 56 The First Step Toward The Fruity Three Sisters- Kurum170k124k16mthCommentedCh 29 Chapter 29 : kunou
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not that I'm going to drop it, it just lazy writing to me.
'Should I find a lover? no, no, no…. even though I'm now a girl but I still think I'm a boy so it's impossible for me to want to have sex with the man~' I thought quickly to deny it.detailTrying to enjoy harem life in the anime world by granting peoples wishAnime & Comics · ShirooYuki - Kurum170k124k16mthCommented
I always see this excuse with gender ends stories and it's annoying.
'Should I find a lover? no, no, no…. even though I'm now a girl but I still think I'm a boy so it's impossible for me to want to have sex with the man~' I thought quickly to deny it.detailTrying to enjoy harem life in the anime world by granting peoples wishAnime & Comics · ShirooYuki - Kurum170k124k17mthCommented
i Love this story but the plot line it jumps all over the place.
Well, for those of you who can follow the story, do tell me if you think I'm going in a straight line or if I'm jumping everywhere like a wild chicken without a head. - Kurum170k124k17mthCommented
this was actually my first decision game I have ever played. after completing it I bought the others.
Did you know that the Reboot of devil may cry is so different that Eva Vergil and Dante's mother was apparently an angel in the reboot? - Kurum170k124k18mthCommented
it's fine I honestly didn't notice the change in his attitude.
[As an apology, here's a bonus chapter. You don't have to give me power stones for this, I must repent for my mistake.] - Kurum170k124k18mthCommented
what was the point in asking us if we would like Fiona in the harem if you just disregard the poll in the first place.
[This could be good news or bad news to you all. Princess Fiona would be included in the harem, I mean she's not totally an Ogre, right? It's just a curse and the reason why it became permanent was because it was Shrek who kissed her. One more thing, unlike Tigress and the others, Princess Fiona would be more like an extra heroine, she won't get much screentime like the others and probably wouldn't get that much development. You can say she's just there to add some spice in his nightly adventures.] - Kurum170k124k18mthCommented
if he's going to get a new body what is the point of calling him Linus if he's just going to get new names like with anakim.
Linus Ozias POV: - Kurum170k124k18mthCommented
no thanks, Shrek deserves love.
[Would you like Fiona to be included in the harem? I mean, she's an ogre and I kinda don't like her personality so I think I wouldn't include her in the harem. I apologize for those who were expecting her to be included in the harem.] - Kurum170k124k18mthCommented
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2. Drop in with normal human form from Worm - Kurum170k124k18mthCommented
oh you really don't know how to end chapters without cliffhangers.. huh.
The answer is... - Kurum170k124k19mthCommented
please don't bring Niko into this, he just wanted out of the criminal scene.
That should be Niko Bellic, the main protagonist of GTA IV. He's currently in hiding after making enemies with the Russian Mob and the Italian Mafia, but considering his skill set, they shouldn't be much of a problem for him. He'll be a massive help for my plans so I'm planning on getting in contact with him in the future. - Kurum170k124k19mthCommented
see you do this every chapter.
[Cliffhanger-kun: I, Cliffhanger-kun is back! My presence is necessary in order to leave you all hanging!! Muwahahaha!] - Kurum170k124k19mthCommented
it would have be more effective if you didn't do this with every chapter so I was expecting this to happen.
[Cliffhanger-kun: Muwahahaha! It is I, Cliffhanger-kun! How does it feel to be blue-balled, huh?!? Suffer!] - Kurum170k124k110mthCommentedCh 120 118 Ah... I see
- Kurum170k124k111mthCommented
this one is great. please continue.
1) Do you want me to continue the story, it will take a lot of time till I reach that 56 chapter. - Kurum170k124k11yrCommented
+1 i honestly don't care but it would be funny.
Yes