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story gets ruined by random time jump around chapter 201 / chapter 202 no explanation .. breaks continuity.
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Please fix, this is killing my want to read the story. I may just dump it all together
Tho I love this story and concept it is very poorly written grammar wise. at times it flows very well. then suddenly you can't tell who's talking to who. sometimes it just blind sides you with random happenings with no explanation or context to why. is it a he or a she...? why is this happening when did we get here why is it going on. hope to come back to it. but gotta put it on a back burner for a while.
♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️😎😎😎😎😎🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩I hate being selfish but ..,🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 any chance we can get more chapters today I've been on the edge of my seat since the attack of green woods started. arguably one of the best story I've read since finishing the Legendary Mechanic!
am I the only on confused about many aspects of the story
wrong definition of receiver. I believe you are referring to it magazine.