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There was no Valen this chapter! I feel so deceived and wronged. How could you trick us like this?? She’s the best part of this fan fic you monster!
This was actually quite fun to read, showing us how this evil woman does her work. I usually just like watching the mc, but this was just a nice little treat. I pray for little Andy who has lost so much, she’s an effective journalist!
Alice Cullen and Malia
I don’t usually write reviews, and the story is good. There is just one single glaring problem with this novel that will make it very hard to read, and that’s the authors spelling and grammar mistakes. These mistakes are not small that you can easily gloss over and it impacts the reading experience greatly.
White oak is only the standard way of killing the originals, like any stake can kill any other vampire no matter how strong they are. There would be many means of killing them other than the white oak, it would just take tremendous powers in magic, or in strength, An army of mages combining their power should easily kill an original, but the witches would all likely end up dead too, from the sheer power used.
Ripping out the heart and head would kill them, but as originals it is nearly impossible to do so to those unique vampires. Elijah planned on ripping out Klaus heart after he was weakened to kill him. It would take a vastly stronger being to do that kind of damage to them, and that kind of being just didn’t really exist in the universe that was shown. Don’t let them regrow head or heart, just make it difficult to almost impossible to remove them.