I quite like this story so far. it's intriguing and I like the character of Annalise. She seems to know what she is doing and how to do it best. the language used in the story os also really to my liking! I am eager to know how this story ends😁

This is so interesting! Even though I have just begun reading I want to know how the story ends! Its successfully captured my attention 😁 Can't wait for the next chapters!

I have read other works of this author and she is phenomenal! I am so excited to see what happens with this story and how many different emotions I get to feel this time around ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I absolutely love her books and would recommend you to read them!!!! Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapters💜

I have the writer from another platform and I love her books! her stories are phenomenal and the language she uses is top notch 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

The story sounded interesting and the title in itself makes you want to click on it our of curiosity. The author seemed to have worked hard in creating this plot and I am sure the story will progress out much more amazing soon.

This book was written wonderfully the amount of observation the writer has put into this is commendable and I loved reading it! The start also seemed perfect and it was gripping and made me crack up at how relatable it was! Good work author bring us more chapters as soon as possible, can't wait to read more!!!

The book is definitely attention grabbing starting from the synopsis to the first chapter, everything that was needed to make it interesting is there! I specifically already like the character Lucifer and more so because she has been portrayed as a woman. It's definitely a must read!

Thank you so much Author! I loved reading this, it brought back such a sweet and painful nostalgia. It was good reading about my childhood favorites again and yet it was painful reading about everything happening in Nederland. The language you used is absolutely brilliant and the story flows well I'd like if there would have been more dialogues but great work! Keep it up.

This book is written really beautifully and the language it entails has a poetic flair to it . It's a pleasure to read and the mystery that surrounds the character and is embedded in its very plot is so interesting that it has ne hooked already!!!!!

The story written by the author is thoroughly gripping and I enjoyed reading it. It's brilliant how the story flows so smoothly. You should try out this book at least once definitely

The author has a vast set of vocabulary and it's clearly visible in her story. The characters thoughts are expressively described and gives a good insight. I'd only suggest fastening the actual progress of the story.

The story has been building up slowly and gradually but it's a good pace. I like the characters and their approach to life it felt relatable for me. The only downside I found was grammar errors which on a second editing could easily be eradicated.

Well the story is quite interesting in itself. There could be a little more descriptions of the settings and emotions but it is doing surprisingly well without it too. I usually don't read this kind of story so I found it pretty unique and specially how similar it really is to an RPG game. It has a right balance of various aspects and I especially enjoy the humour in between. A little editing of punctuation and grammar could increase its standard to another level but besides that it's well written.

aww i feel bad for Furara...

*cough* perv *cough*

well this was interesting...

You sure know the worth of family! 💜 it is so easily visible from your writing.... Keep writing more and more looking forward to it!!!!!!!!!

This book has a brilliant story. It's really captivating and you wouldn't want to put down the book once you start reading it! Do check it out!

I loved the story so far. The blurb was short but inviting. I found a few grammatical mistakes here and there but it can be easily edited. Keep up the good work and looking forward to more chapters.