What's that about zero release? I don't remember anything about that

Jesus christ, we have a mc who WANTS to be a madman...

You are already improving this fanfic, keep up the good work and remove harem elements

100 daily power stones...

"stupid people do nonsense, and they can't give a reason for what they write"

New pirate era begins, lol (because everyone else is dead(

All the points you mentioned - I agree, but I had 1 problem - you can't increase stats to g rank without going to dungeon, because you need exelia for that. That's not a problem anymore, because mc is going to the dungeon now. Another point is that after mc/bell became level 1 you gave them 10 points in each stat. Again, it's not a problem anymore because now after level up, but it's not how danmachi works. You could see level 1 not as a starting point, but as a level up from level 0. Lucky your story didn't deviate much because of these mistakes.

Danmachi stats don't work like that. First comes the letter "I" and then the number "0" together it's "I0", not "10". Also the stats grow with the help of exilia + action, mc doesn't have exilia so his stats shouldn't even grow, hell... his stats are growing at monstrous rate.

How did he get younger? Why wasn't it explained?

Seriously?

Please continue, don't stop

At least he doesn't have a hehim core ...

Ngl, at first I thought you defended this fic

Writing quality - 2/5, because of the foreshadowing the next chapter and dumb authors comments in each chapter. Do you have a bad self-image or something? Stop writing comments for approval. Updates - not bad 4/5 Story development - the story had a lot of improved changes by the translator, so 5/5 Character design - the way I see it the simulation made him a psychopath, I didn't have much of an opinion about mc originally, but with simulations I started hating his personality. I mean mc thinks he is good after meditation and self reflection and then does the opposite, weep like a weeb he is - 2/5 World background - everything is predictable 3/5

I don't know why you chose this song - it's not even good

I don't understand, what's the point of all this? Why does mc want to be a youtuber? For money? Just go to stark or something, why are you writing a f musical for views? Not only is that dumb, but now you should be a target with spy gadget videos and all. If this fic was about system that makes mc youtube videos, I'll understand and even read that, but without the system there's no incentive to do all of that.