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I know the MC has to participate in the war, but that's it, it doesn't need some altruistic justification for it. He's in a simulation, him going to war should be a selfish desire to improve his strength and not die in the real world. Saving someone would make a lot of sense if they were a big fan of the character and didn't want him to die. And not this crazy "risk your life (simulation life) saving the son of the dead couple I never met but I lived in their house for five years and somehow I feel that even after they are dead they are happy from a complete unknown lives in their house". (Google translator)
What kind of personality is this? Does the MC live in an abandoned house for five years, find a portrait of the previous owners, and somehow feel indebted to them? That didn't even make sense, how does this guy live in society? What would happen if someone treated him politely, like he walks down the street knowing that there was someone who made an effort to build it? You took a Chinese MC's personality of repaying kindness and multiplied it by 100, with that precedent the MC should sacrifice his life for any small act of kindness. (Google translate)
This is a cultivation story, and no one cares whether it was stolen or not. Xiao yan has Yao lao, and medusa to protect him, so it won't cause any problems for the MC. The sect leader is the enemy of the MC and the sect is weaker than the MC so why would the MC stoop to helping the sect against a member of his family? Not to mention that you're forgetting that this is a cultivation novel and according to the usual trope, the elders should be kneeling down to the MC and not trying to attack the young master of the families, it's practically a slap in the face. (Google translate)
I don't understand the readers wanting the MC to be against Xiao Yan. According to you the MC has to stand against his family, just because his cousin "stole" a celestial flame an ownerless resource. Not to mention that the cloud sect is much weaker than the Xiao family, and if joined by the MC, Yao lao and Xiao yi Xian they should easily destroy this sect. Not to mention that the sect leader works for the hall of souls, the enemy of the MC. So the MC has to compensate the enemy weaker than him, for a "robbery" that wasn't a robbery? (Googie translate)
I don't understand the readers wanting the MC to be against Xiao Yan. According to you the MC has to stand against his family, just because his cousin "stole" a celestial flame an ownerless resource. Not to mention that the cloud sect is much weaker than the Xiao family, and if joined by the MC, Yao lao and Xiao yi Xian they should easily destroy this sect. Not to mention that the sect leader works for the hall of souls, the enemy of the MC. So the MC has to compensate the enemy weaker than him, for a "robbery" that wasn't a robbery? (Googie translate)
I don't understand the readers wanting the MC to be against Xiao Yan. According to you the MC has to stand against his family, just because his cousin "stole" a celestial flame an ownerless resource. Not to mention that the cloud sect is much weaker than the Xiao family, and if joined by the MC, Yao lao and Xiao yi Xian they should easily destroy this sect. Not to mention that the sect leader works for the hall of souls, the enemy of the MC. So the MC has to compensate the enemy weaker than him, for a "robbery" that wasn't a robbery? (Googie translate)
I'm reading the chapters recently and so far it's still a platonic love, and it should stay that way for a long time if the author doesn't develop Hanna's character so that she has a "more open mind". And it's not even because of the incest, it's because Riley is a crazy genocide that everyone is afraid of. (google translate)
You completely changed the personality of the MC, before he was a bit of an edgelord but at least he was pleasant to read, now he has become a battle-mad arrogant Chinese protagonist. And why continue reading if he doesn't want to change the "plot"? Since he already destroyed the hyuga clan, told the truth of the world to Orochimaru, was the greatest genius in konoha and etc, the plot is destroying the moment he reincarnated. (google translate)
Useless wishes. What's the advantage of sharingan with a kryptonian body? None. Aside from the illusion and some random power (which could have been desired), a sharingan adds nothing to a Kryptonian. Hell, even the red eyes from heat vision are cooler than the sharingan aesthetic. The MC as a Kryptonian only needs to absorb sunlight for a few years and then crush the planet with his bare hands. For some reason some fanfic authors still insist on making the MC have desires, it's much more believable to spin a roulette wheel, and blame everything on luck. (Google translator)
What a great moment to write a One Piece fic, with so many revelations in the manga, congratulations author. Do you intend to make a multiverse with your fanfics? A kind of DarkWolfShiro footprint, I really wanted to see Yovan and Ian meet, one obsessed with death and the other with survival. I look forward to your new stories and I hope you continue in this same theme. I hope Yovan is the new yonkou in Whitebeard's place. (Google Translate).
Author, does limitless have any loopholes that allowed the MC to survive? Because theoretically with all this bad luck his plans shouldn't work. I don't know if Yovan knows, but there is the lucky fruit, I think it should be the MC's next goal, after all, each test of the system is harder than the last (if he doesn't know, make him read it in the fruit encyclopedias, or something like). Google Translate
Magic may not be the strong point of the Asgardians, but the runes are very Op, if you want an easy powerup, just sacrifice some in the mimir well for knowledge, or really study, Rune King Thor became almost omniscient only in the rune base. (Google translate)