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Sorcein

Sorcein

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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein5mth
    Commented

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    Ch 22 Time loop (2)
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    Thanos : Chronicles of The Mad Titan
    Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein9mth
    Replied to Rex_Drakul

    Exactly, fanfic is usually much lower quality than the original, why am I going to consume something inferior if I can read original content that has the same premise (kind and compassionate characters) and is much superior in technical terms?

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    DC: Celestial Light Human
    Anime & Comics · SwayStar
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein11mth
    Replied to Sorcein

    I know the MC has to participate in the war, but that's it, it doesn't need some altruistic justification for it. He's in a simulation, him going to war should be a selfish desire to improve his strength and not die in the real world. Saving someone would make a lot of sense if they were a big fan of the character and didn't want him to die. And not this crazy "risk your life (simulation life) saving the son of the dead couple I never met but I lived in their house for five years and somehow I feel that even after they are dead they are happy from a complete unknown lives in their house". (Google translator)

    Ch 7 Chapter 6: Martial Master In The Simulation!
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    Multiverse Simulator
    Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein11mth
    Commented

    What kind of personality is this? Does the MC live in an abandoned house for five years, find a portrait of the previous owners, and somehow feel indebted to them? That didn't even make sense, how does this guy live in society? What would happen if someone treated him politely, like he walks down the street knowing that there was someone who made an effort to build it? You took a Chinese MC's personality of repaying kindness and multiplied it by 100, with that precedent the MC should sacrifice his life for any small act of kindness. (Google translate)

    Ch 7 Chapter 6: Martial Master In The Simulation!
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    Multiverse Simulator
    Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Replied to Bharati_Singha_7905

    This is a fanfic of which story? As there is no synopsis it is difficult to be interested in starting to read

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    Ruthless Business man
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Posted

    Very good, I recommend that you put in the title or in the synopsis that it is a translation of the MTL. I hope you continue with the translation, I'm really enjoying this story. (Google translator)

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    Traveling through the heavens with an umbrella [MTL]
    Movies · Azaroth_7160
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Replied to MrAkillies

    It doesn't really matter, the author himself has already made it clear that Xiao yan is a secondary character.

    Ch 241 Chapter 241: Dou Ancestor Yun Shan
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    BTTH Life Simulator System
    Anime & Comics · Kisshot
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Replied to MrAkillies

    This is a cultivation story, and no one cares whether it was stolen or not. Xiao yan has Yao lao, and medusa to protect him, so it won't cause any problems for the MC. The sect leader is the enemy of the MC and the sect is weaker than the MC so why would the MC stoop to helping the sect against a member of his family? Not to mention that you're forgetting that this is a cultivation novel and according to the usual trope, the elders should be kneeling down to the MC and not trying to attack the young master of the families, it's practically a slap in the face. (Google translate)

    Ch 241 Chapter 241: Dou Ancestor Yun Shan
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    BTTH Life Simulator System
    Anime & Comics · Kisshot
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Replied to Go_F_yourself

    I don't understand the readers wanting the MC to be against Xiao Yan. According to you the MC has to stand against his family, just because his cousin "stole" a celestial flame an ownerless resource. Not to mention that the cloud sect is much weaker than the Xiao family, and if joined by the MC, Yao lao and Xiao yi Xian they should easily destroy this sect. Not to mention that the sect leader works for the hall of souls, the enemy of the MC. So the MC has to compensate the enemy weaker than him, for a "robbery" that wasn't a robbery? (Googie translate)

    Ch 241 Chapter 241: Dou Ancestor Yun Shan
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    BTTH Life Simulator System
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Replied to airambach26

    I don't understand the readers wanting the MC to be against Xiao Yan. According to you the MC has to stand against his family, just because his cousin "stole" a celestial flame an ownerless resource. Not to mention that the cloud sect is much weaker than the Xiao family, and if joined by the MC, Yao lao and Xiao yi Xian they should easily destroy this sect. Not to mention that the sect leader works for the hall of souls, the enemy of the MC. So the MC has to compensate the enemy weaker than him, for a "robbery" that wasn't a robbery? (Googie translate)

    Ch 241 Chapter 241: Dou Ancestor Yun Shan
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    BTTH Life Simulator System
    Anime & Comics · Kisshot
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Commented

    I don't understand the readers wanting the MC to be against Xiao Yan. According to you the MC has to stand against his family, just because his cousin "stole" a celestial flame an ownerless resource. Not to mention that the cloud sect is much weaker than the Xiao family, and if joined by the MC, Yao lao and Xiao yi Xian they should easily destroy this sect. Not to mention that the sect leader works for the hall of souls, the enemy of the MC. So the MC has to compensate the enemy weaker than him, for a "robbery" that wasn't a robbery? (Googie translate)

    Ch 241 Chapter 241: Dou Ancestor Yun Shan
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    BTTH Life Simulator System
    Anime & Comics · Kisshot
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Replied to Foreplay

    I'm reading the chapters recently and so far it's still a platonic love, and it should stay that way for a long time if the author doesn't develop Hanna's character so that she has a "more open mind". And it's not even because of the incest, it's because Riley is a crazy genocide that everyone is afraid of. (google translate)

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    Villain Retirement
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Commented

    You completely changed the personality of the MC, before he was a bit of an edgelord but at least he was pleasant to read, now he has become a battle-mad arrogant Chinese protagonist. And why continue reading if he doesn't want to change the "plot"? Since he already destroyed the hyuga clan, told the truth of the world to Orochimaru, was the greatest genius in konoha and etc, the plot is destroying the moment he reincarnated. (google translate)

    Ch 27 Neji Versus Konohagakure Forces
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    The Breaking of Fate [High Quality]
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Commented

    What is the color of the MC's chakra cloak?

    Ch 24 The New Beginning After The Timeskip
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    The Breaking of Fate [High Quality]
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Posted

    Useless wishes. What's the advantage of sharingan with a kryptonian body? None. Aside from the illusion and some random power (which could have been desired), a sharingan adds nothing to a Kryptonian. Hell, even the red eyes from heat vision are cooler than the sharingan aesthetic. The MC as a Kryptonian only needs to absorb sunlight for a few years and then crush the planet with his bare hands. For some reason some fanfic authors still insist on making the MC have desires, it's much more believable to spin a roulette wheel, and blame everything on luck. (Google translator)

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    One Piece: Undefeated
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Posted

    Man I'm really enjoying this story and I think it has a lot of potential. But if you want to give it a little seriousness, I would recommend rewriting it, only without Dr. Manhattan, in my opinion, would be very interesting. It's not a criticism.

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    As The GOW Thor
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Replied to Danteuros

    Exactly, in sandman Lucifer can defeat Morpheus but he doesn't, if he does he himself would lose his dream/hope. Luci may be the second most powerful being, but he is subject to the rules of infinity and creation.

    Ch 4 Chaos Sea
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    Percy Jackson : The Odyssey of a Primordial.
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Commented

    What a great moment to write a One Piece fic, with so many revelations in the manga, congratulations author. Do you intend to make a multiverse with your fanfics? A kind of DarkWolfShiro footprint, I really wanted to see Yovan and Ian meet, one obsessed with death and the other with survival. I look forward to your new stories and I hope you continue in this same theme. I hope Yovan is the new yonkou in Whitebeard's place. (Google Translate).

    Ch 92 The World In Silence
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    One Piece: Limitlessness
    Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Commented

    Author, does limitless have any loopholes that allowed the MC to survive? Because theoretically with all this bad luck his plans shouldn't work. I don't know if Yovan knows, but there is the lucky fruit, I think it should be the MC's next goal, after all, each test of the system is harder than the last (if he doesn't know, make him read it in the fruit encyclopedias, or something like). Google Translate

    Ch 77 I Just Don't Fucking Understand!?? I
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    One Piece: Limitlessness
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  • Sorcein
    Sorcein1yr
    Commented

    Magic may not be the strong point of the Asgardians, but the runes are very Op, if you want an easy powerup, just sacrifice some in the mimir well for knowledge, or really study, Rune King Thor became almost omniscient only in the rune base. (Google translate)

    Ch 17 God of Vengeance 1
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