Same

Damn Klara

I have to agree

Thank youuuu 💙💙💙🥺

I love Seraphis! He’s very well written and interesting. I am very curious on how this story will play out. It has lots of dialogue and gets quite funny at times, but it also does a good job showing the dark sides of the characters.

Most likely

I wish Hazel would communicate a little more with Lucian

Yeah same

I’ll try not to let you down! 💙💙💙

Thank You 🥺🥺 I really appreciate it 💙💙

True

This is getting dragged Out 🙃

I agree

I think this chapter was a little bit of a mess, the dream just started all of a sudden and then it changed to Lucians view.

I have too agree she needs to communicate more with Lucian

The story is interesting and engaging, it makes you want to read more of it and see how it will progress. I would however like to critique some aspects of it, such as the sudden changes in the point of view, which is distracting. Also the characters need to communicate more instead of making a simple problem last multiple chapters. The story is very promising and I think it can become even better upon fixing these small issues.

I think Hazel needs to communicate more instead of being so pasive, still an enjoyable story so far