Review Detail of AleirArt in Married to the Devil's Son

The story is interesting and engaging, it makes you want to read more of it and see how it will progress. I would however like to critique some aspects of it, such as the sudden changes in the point of view, which is distracting. Also the characters need to communicate more instead of making a simple problem last multiple chapters. The story is very promising and I think it can become even better upon fixing these small issues.