Very cool story. Fun to read. I immediately want more. Currently, my favorite character is Cliff. I look forward to its further development. Good luck to the author!

I was more disappointed than David. But seriously, I have no idea what Gustav was thinking. Fact, they were not a couple in the literal sense of the word, but nevertheless something there connected them.

I have a strange feeling about it. I hope that nothing bad will come out of it.

Love this book! It's interesting and a great read! Thank you for your hard work, Author!

Oh wow!

No, Gustav is not that bad :)

This is a really well-written chapter. Thank you!

David has a knack for getting himself into awkward situations :)

I hope we will see more of Ursula. She is really cool.

Well, I like Ursula.

I like Gustav more and more.

I will frankly admit that I would have preferred more. I think you could have pulled a few more threads. Maybe someday you will do it again. However, the ending gives me a sense of some closure, so while I would have liked more, it's ok. Thank you for your hard work.

Great! THX!

This chapter ending... Da*m!

An interesting beginning, followed by a very interesting twist with a big acceleration of the plot concerning ML and the book is not yet 20 chapters long. Definitely worth adding to your library and start reading.

I can't wait for this test!

Good chapter, but I can't wait for next one :)

It's about time :)

Well, yes, it would probably be better for David if he didn't eavesdrop after all.