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My main issue with this story is that once you start paying for chapters the book is out of order and none of the following chapters make sense it just seems like the author does not care about the quality. it is also blatant robbery to pay after chapter 10. If the author is willing to fix it then ill change my review. otherwise the story has a ton of potential.
I overall liked the story until the MC becomes this slave that is dragged around all the time and ultimately doesn’t do anything business related nor grow his “empire” that he planned on creating. Maybe the story will progress more but my personal preference when I go into stories that make the MC seem like he will be better and ultimately makes him a slave it’s not my cup of tea. But overall it’s pretty good other than the character.
Hey author I’m loving this so far do you plan to have time skips or something it feels like 50 chapters in and only a little more than a week or so has passed I’m hoping in the future there’s another era of advancement or maybe the MC advances technology or something. Or even Greco-Roman era. I was just hoping you could maybe explain your thoughts or tell me if you have plans for that. But otherwise keep it up!
Don’t feel obligated to post on the weekends as much as I’d like you to slave away and make these great chapters. Burning out will make them stop completely so let’s avoid that. All the good stories end up that way cause the author feels compelled to please the readers. So all I’m saying is take your break and don’t feel like it’s your moral obligation to make us all happy. Love the story so far keep it up!
This is honestly so awful like I have no idea what happened he went from recharging the game after buying himself exclusively beta testing equipment to everyone having one and they are having a massive fight. But I’m confused if the world has already merged because in the same chapter it talked about two months till the world merges but the next chapter is a full blown battle in the game no context. Maybe they missed uploading a chapter or something but I honestly don’t understand and do not recommend it. Just as a reference I’m a native English speaker and even Beowulf makes more sense than this.
First off it’s criminal to start making people pay at chapter 23 not just for the copyright but the fact is that you’re this greedy to start a 23 for poor writing structure and grammar. Not only that but just like the other user on here said your novel can be taken down in a blink of an eye if they find this. This had good potential but don’t make people pay for half assed writing.