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hyorinmaru2dReplied to I_dont_believe_itBut he wouldn’t hurt a fly. Just look at that innocent smile
Since he had a lot of free time, Henry happily accepted. No one wanted their close ones to have their mind easily intruded upon by any Tom, Dick and Harry.- hyorinmaru2dCommentedWhen he asked him, Newt looked surprised as he replied, "Well, because your…"
- hyorinmaru7dPosted
Let me start this review off with something positive. I'll gladly admit that you’re far better than most fanfic authors on this app, but I am somewhat concerned with the abrupt change from Traning/Battle maniac to psychopathic killer. I wouldn't mind killing if it made sense, but reading about the MC killing randoms for nonsensical reasons was a major mood killer. He went straight to killing without any motive other than basic information or because their fear gave him a sense of sick satisfaction. Sorry for rambling on and on, I hope you continue to improve despite any negative reviews you receive.
- hyorinmaru7dCommented
This guys MO
'Still, I'm curious, did I really happen to get stronger all because I fought that wolf? I find it hard to believe I got stronger from a simple fight.' Thought Diddy with a thoughtful expression while resting in the hammock. - hyorinmaru10dCommented"I don't want to conquer anything, Shiki. I believe the one with the most freedom on the whole ocean... is the Pirate King!" Roger roared, drawing his cutlass and pointing it at Shiki, who looked at Roger with bloodshot eyes. He felt insulted because he had never given any other man such equal status in life. Shiki was even willing to split the throne with him if Roger agreed.
- hyorinmaru10dReplied to Victor_7740
That’s a good theory. I think that it fits One Piece better as a whole. Voice Of All Things seems like an ability that is truly rare. (Not that Kings Haki isn’t rare, but we see it quite a lot.)
'...Weirdo,' Thought Nojiko. Unlike all the other boys of his age who spent their every day playing 'Sora, Warrior of the Sea' with wooden sticks, Rowan was always alone, either running and working out in the forest or helping with his father's work. However, being 'weird' didn't mean she disliked him. Instead, he seemed mature, and his passion for getting stronger reminded her of Nami when it came to drawing maps. - hyorinmaru12dCommented"Gonna cry?" Satoru taunted, his provocation further aggravating the situation.
- hyorinmaru16dCommentedI then lean my body I release a bit of air before whispering "Way of the Phoenix: Birds of a feather " before shooting off into the direction of another tree before chriss crossing my arms with my left arm going under my right while both blade made contact with tree while finishing the saying "Flock together".
- hyorinmaru17dCommentedA dead body, he had to admit after trying to deny the inevitable for so long. A dead body that looked so much like him. A hoarse voice called out a name as he stared at the body. "Satoru"
- hyorinmaru1mthCommentedFrom the anime it is said that [Human Possession] Is a magic that allows the user to seal souls inside objects and manipulate them as he wish. In the anime Bickslow uses this magic to seal souls inside of totem like things made of wood.
- hyorinmaru1mthCommentedAfter all, while he trusted Daiki and his character quite implicitly, he could not say the temptation of getting to bed Mei Terumi would not be the highest of temptations. Even he himself may be tempted, never mind a lad as young as Daiki!
- hyorinmaru1mthCommented"No, they sensed my excessive force just now!" Takeshi silently slipped away. His spiritual power was remarkably strong, more than ten times that of an average person. It seemed that his encounter with the light cluster had been fortuitous. It granted him this extraordinary power, for he was almost certain that an evil presence had summoned him to this plane. Yet, with his wisdom and martial skill, he had broken free from the chains. Similarly, the golden fingers of the system were impossible. Nevertheless, he couldn't help but wonder about the peculiar red glow.
- hyorinmaru1mthReplied to Humbuub
- hyorinmaru1mthReplied to maskhara
He has the knowledge of the Pev brothers, does he not? And not every fanfic follows the canon concept of HP. Most have cores or a type of magical system.
[I would also like to hear about if you want to be Harry being OP or just above average. I have my ideas about it but your opinions would also be considered] - hyorinmaru1mthCommentedHer son had this terrible habit of feeding them information bit by bit. She wondered where he learned that from.
- hyorinmaru1mthCommented
It would be weird if he wasn’t op. He should be op asf in terms of magical power, but inexperienced in using said power.
[I would also like to hear about if you want to be Harry being OP or just above average. I have my ideas about it but your opinions would also be considered] - hyorinmaru1mthCommentedChapter 68: KKK!
- hyorinmaru1mthCommentedHis first target was the Common Welsh Green Dragon, possibly the most dragon-like of all dragon breeds in the Harry Potter world.
- hyorinmaru1mthCommentedThe Renatasian said, "I will try Master but I will do what I must."