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Review Detail of hyorinmaru in One Piece: Chaos Kong

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Let me start this review off with something positive. I'll gladly admit that you’re far better than most fanfic authors on this app, but I am somewhat concerned with the abrupt change from Traning/Battle maniac to psychopathic killer. I wouldn't mind killing if it made sense, but reading about the MC killing randoms for nonsensical reasons was a major mood killer. He went straight to killing without any motive other than basic information or because their fear gave him a sense of sick satisfaction. Sorry for rambling on and on, I hope you continue to improve despite any negative reviews you receive.

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One Piece: Chaos Kong

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You know I will 👍🏾😘