cringe

Mc after spending eons acquiring knowledge and wisdom in the time loop

You are very good at writing a lot but at the same time not writing anything

Okay, I won't insist anymore.

For the love of Christ my brother, combine two or three chapters into one but don't commit the crime of releasing this tiny thing

a teenager with a lot of intelligence and little wisdom. this is mc

So it's basically a Character Model System, just on a temporary basis? like, he just transforms into someone and gains their powers and when he deactivates he goes back to his normal human form? please answer, because if so I don't want to waste time reading

the biggest reason i absolutely hated naruto ff is because the mc lowers himself in some way only to start over again, and it's happening again now. Why not just create a new story from scratch?

Sigh... you really had to connect that story with that other... thing

I'm sure the MC's power was Speed. what happened?

I believe that while you are putting together the skeleton of the story, you can also read other stories or even watch films and series while you are fishing for ideas from other works and adding to your Anyway, I hope my comment is of some use.

Don't write anything just on a moment's impulse, build a story slowly and save the drafts, build the skeleton of the story little by little until 80% of the total story. After that you can try writing the chapters and modifying them as you wish, only then when you have many chapters in stock should you launch them. This is a tip from those who have never written a story, but in my head it works very well 😁

I've let almost 200 chapters accumulate and it's still slow, I'm almost finished and I feel like nothing really interesting has happened, he hasn't even mastered the jutsus he started training hundreds of chapters ago... it's really frustrating

Just levitate Thanos and throw him into some volcano or even the sun, he has nothing but his physical strength to fight, it's not like he can "grab" telekinesis and fight against, he would just flop around in the air like a fish 🤷🏻‍♂️ I really don't understand why there's so much fuss coming from most MC's when they always have skills to defeat Thanos in such a simple and easy way

So another MC with the mind of a teenager who only thinks about harems

That's a relief, I really don't like it when they change the date of events

I think you replied to my other comment about Loki's invasion but it's saying the comment has been deleted

just tell me if you really have any plans for this fanfic dude, this has been gathering dust in my library for who knows how many months or years and it only has so many chapters...Just tell me if this will be updated more often or if I should remove this from my library soon