Hi Author, I'm not sure if you will read this, but I wanted to let you know your novel is being plagiarized and stolen on Amazon as an ebook. Its called "VALOR: A Cultivation Fantasy Adventure for Men" by Atticus Ronald, and is completely copy and pasted. I actually found this from another novel I've read named Ascension of the Immortal Asura, which was also copied by the same person, as well as a few other webnovels.

author is clearly deleting bad reviews from his novel

of course they are lol, half the author's do this on this app. they have their novel sitting at 4.8 stars or some really high rating and you read it and it's a dumpster fire xD

Honestly I thought the same but he starts showing his uses here and there and eventually towards like chap 650-700 an event happens that causes him to kinda have a personality shift for the better

Really great cultivation novel, one of the few truly entertaining ones on this app and in my opinion underrated. I also really appreciate how the author writes their story arcs, especially in the jade dragon empire inheritance and the blood fiend sect story arcs. Keep up the good work author 😎👍

the rizzler

bro the novel is called "God Eyes" what did you expect 💀💀

No hate to the author but I just feel like this is wayyy too fast paced it just doesn't feel like natural progression of the story

I rarely enjoy webnovels anymore as I've read most of the good ones and I've long realized that 99% of the time when reviews say a novel is good, they are usually lying in my opinion. So I'd say I'm pretty critical of the novels I read, but I've gotten pretty far into this one and honestly it's one of my favorite ones Ive read recently. It has some issues with writing flow but I've noticed the author getting better as I read tangibly. The characters are pretty solid, nothing too special, the main character is likeable as well. The novel premise is pretty similar to ones I've seen before but it's one of the few on this app that actually does it decently. Also the way the world is set up is personally pretty interesting. One last thing I enjoyed was how during arcs where most stories get boring, like the academy arc for example, this author does a good job at having things occur in the story that keep you interested, which alot of other stories lack. TLDR: Cons: Writing flow and Grammer (improving). Overall writing quality can struggle in terms of clarity sometimes. Pros: Intriguing world and a solid story with likeable characters. The power structure seems to be clearly laid out and the story seems pretty consistent with this structure so far. Overall I'd give this a 7.5/10 and encourage people to try it out.

Wait I'm confused he has to be atleast level 2 for the exam but he's only level 1 still?

Yep I completely agree. It sucks too because the idea is really interesting but it gets muddled by poor grammar/execution.

bro she's 4 💀

Finally an author who lays out structure for their story! I see it all too often where authors write stories like this without laying down the structure of the cultivation system, leading to it becoming confusing later on so thank you for this lol

Saying that your MC/story is not based on anything else is simply untrue. Whether it was conscious or not does not matter, this novel still follows the same generic path that most other novels of this genre do and there was 100% a reason for that. You dont just "accidentally" write a copy paste of tons of other generic novels. And I really find your reply distasteful to be honest you try to act like it's not your problem if a reader finds the novel generic when it completely should be. I suggest you learn to take criticism better instead of deflecting every negative aspect pointed out about your story. Have a good day.

Yet another case of an interesting idea ruined by poor writing. Honestly this is one of the worst quality cultivation novels I've ever read, and that's saying something.

fr, author just twisted the logic of the situation to further the shitty plot in this story instead of actually writing a well thought out, realistic scenario

im dropping because of this LMAO

Wow I hope his perspective here changes more to a revenge type of thing or something

agreed, it was pretty difficult to understand who was talking and what was happening because of how it was written

Honestly I didnt really like this whole thing with the snake not because I think the mc should be heartless but because of how you wrote it. The mc murdered that pack of animals (I think they were called wilkers) and didnt care but then suddenly he kills a snake and feels so bad he makes a vow to raise its child?? It just doesnt really feel natural to me and doesnt fit the way the story was going so far.