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seevi3ion1mthPostedI'm posting this self review right after posting the second chapter, currently the book isn't worth this high of a review score, hopefully it will be getting genuine 5-star reviews, I'm not a professional at all, just a guy with some ideas that I hope could come to light in an interesting and coherent way. I have high expectations for this book, and it should have a lot of twists that I hope are unexpected :) ! THANKS FOR READING !
- seevi3ion6mthReplied to Francie_The_Incred
Francie The Inbred, retard
Wang Lin’s heart felt warm and he smiled. “Wang Hao, thank you.” - seevi3ion8mthCommented
Jean Paul the Ghost Rida
The police ran after him and continued to rain bullets at him as he drove away on a motorcycle, one they stole only recently. - seevi3ion8mthReplied to cade2065
green bug chaos lord strong
Shielding his face as he flew back, Grayosn's expression instantly sank at Godfrey's new form as a golden cape materialized on his back, and a golden spectral Ankh symbol appeared behind him. - seevi3ion8mthReplied to itsyaboi_noob[Body modification: the ability to change your body and those of others to grant physical enhancements, change appearances, and imbue different qualities, depending on your Biology skill]
- seevi3ion8mthReplied to Shusendo
right??? what a weirdo!
The academy's hospital ward would put any Earth's hospital to shame. The floors were able to self-clean, the beds would move and massage the patients' bodies to avoid bedsores, and they constantly monitored their vitals. - seevi3ion9mthReplied to Easycall"No use crying over spilled milk, I suppose," Richard carelessly said, shrugging his shoulder as he began walking after gesturing for Gray and Benjamin to follow.
- seevi3ion9mthCommented
This is Richard Dragon
"Sorry, kid, but you'll have to make do with me until my student is done with his business," said a tall, well-built man with ginger, fiery beard and hair, crossing his arms, making Jason grit his teeth in frustration. - seevi3ion9mthReplied to BOKC_Trvll
I appreciate it 🙏🏾 thanks!
Dian Dom, a young brown skinned man of slightly above average looks that had long curly hair that reaches his shoulders, and seemed to be around 170 - 180 cm tall was reassuring his worried mother while they sat together in their living room sofa and watched the news. - seevi3ion9mthReplied to Mid_MidasI stared into the mirror, and an unfamiliar face stared back. Short, messy black hair, black eyes, and an average face that only those familiar it with would remember.
- seevi3ion9mthReplied to SWORDSMAN_9
Yeah, this paragraph is basically a Hyperbole, an intentional exaggeration to show Dian's values. Of course, he won't literally repay anyone a thousand times over lol, not everyone could be like Thorfinn.
If you treat Dian with kindness, he will repay it a hundred times over. However, If you have bad intentions towards him, he will repay them with intentions a thousand times worse. - seevi3ion9mthReplied to SWORDSMAN_9
I personally think that being grateful is not a stupid value, of course, he has his limits that he won't cross, but what I tried to convey in this paragraph is that Dian isn't a pushover, but at the same time, he isn't a genuinely bad person for no reason. Because that would be stupid, and bad writing in my opinion.
If you treat Dian with kindness, he will repay it a hundred times over. However, If you have bad intentions towards him, he will repay them with intentions a thousand times worse. - seevi3ion9mthCommented
Drawing of Luo I did:
Time passed, and the seasons changed, a whole year had passed since Dian took over Luo's body. - seevi3ion9mthCommented
I drew him:
A young man could be seen leaving the market currently, the man wore cheap looking grayish brown robes, typical of the villagers of this world, his hair was buzzed, his skin was slightly tanned from the long exposure to the sun, his eyebrows were thick, and he stood at 165 cm. - seevi3ion9mthCommented
A drawing of the Curved Claw Ape I did:
Dian finally arrived at the cave entrance, sprinting inside, he began running in the direction of the unstable section of cave ceiling, the Curved Claw Ape was right behind him with only a few meters separating them, the screams of the enraged monkey constantly rang out behind Dian, as if to remind him how close the ape was. - seevi3ion9mthCommented
A drawing of Dian i did:
Dian finally arrived at the cave entrance, sprinting inside, he began running in the direction of the unstable section of cave ceiling, the Curved Claw Ape was right behind him with only a few meters separating them, the screams of the enraged monkey constantly rang out behind Dian, as if to remind him how close the ape was. - seevi3ion9mthCommented
A drawing of Dian I did.
Dian Dom, a young brown skinned man of slightly above average looks that had long curly hair that reaches his shoulders, and seemed to be around 170 - 180 cm tall was reassuring his worried mother while they sat together in their living room sofa and watched the news. - seevi3ion10mthCommented
the voices SCHIZO
After Wang Xiao obtained a few more item cards from Ma Yunle, he hurriedly rushed to the place where the voices were the loudest. - seevi3ion10mthReplied to webnovel_1862
that's cause he has home court advantage, home buff
There was a big gap between platinum and gold. Only soldiers above platinum were qualified to break through to level nine. - seevi3ion10mthReplied to Noah_Jacques_7965From afar, there were many special arrow towers erected in these three territories.