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  • ZCOOL_999
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    oh please no 😔

    Before he could reach her and rip her head off her body, a wall of energy erupted from the hands of the man in the helmet, making Noir flip back just before the wall could touch him.
    The Boys - Let Me Show You A True Hero!
    Anime & Comics · Writing_Shirou
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    siempre me olvido de el

    Black noir, ever silent, simply nodded his head agreeing with him.
    The Boys - Let Me Show You A True Hero!
    Anime & Comics · Writing_Shirou
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    jorgen

    Dressed in military fatigues and carrying what looked more like a staff than anything else, he appeared. A huge mountain of muscle, his face was serious and his white hair was rather short, adding to his intimidating presence. 
    Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    yeah. but you can paid them and they sell you the energy

    There was even a box made of a strange material whose label indicated that it was an experiment to create a micro-universe to harness its energy to power the laboratory and not pay so much light, an idea discarded because it seemed cruel to others, even to Samus. 
    Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    Really good story development in this first chapster and character design in the case of the elves and their resons to make this travels to see the world oblivious of the dark in this society

    World of Euphoria
    History · Retrion
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    I think that you make a really good development of the case and the feelings of PJ about the metods

    Ch 59 Chapter 59
    Daily Drama (In American TV Shows)
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    I don't know much about the events too. But you can make a time line so you can see what can you put and what ignore

    Ch 52 Chapter 52
    Daily Drama (In American TV Shows)
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    pero jesus curo enfermedades

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  • ZCOOL_999
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    thank for the notice

    Ch 22 Notice! I forgot the count number of those
    Yugioh GX: Flexing? I'm just META Traumatised.
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    true. and if we thought carefully, we can see that it is a cartoon so logic is not the same

    With this, I won't need to worry about money problems for my future experiments and my future base since I'll just have to enlarge the size of a piece of gold to that of a rock.
    becoming Dipper in Gravity falls isn’t So bad ,is it??(rewriting)
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    el nombre real de soos no lo conosco pero creo que era algo como zeus altamirano ramirez

    Apart from that, I was able to get to know all the employees of "the Mystery Shack" who are extremely friendly, especially Soos Ramirez.
    becoming Dipper in Gravity falls isn’t So bad ,is it??(rewriting)
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    deben ser oos pies de elfos

    Even a simple boiled potato had a distinct flavor that Artel enjoyed.
    Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby
    Movies · Kitty_Loves_Milk
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    malfoy and the other two

    Artel sneered and said little, simply drawing his wand and facing the three Malfoys.
    Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby
    Movies · Kitty_Loves_Milk
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    if they don't know then dont happend

    "Of course, of course," Michael said with a smirk, sharing a meaningful look with Jimmy.
    Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    if you want to make explicit escenes of smut put in auxiliar chapters, so you don't have to worry about the people who did not read the warmings. and for the scenes of gore put and warming at the bigging and end of the scene

    I also thought about putting the explicit sex scenes in a separate chapter so people who don't want to read the explicit scenes can just skip the titled explicit scene chapter altogether without missing the story. But then again, it might be pretty hard to achieve and there could be awkward chapter lengths but if you're okay with it, then this could be an option.
    Into the Hunter x Hunter world with Jujutsu Kaisen System
    Anime & Comics · Chaotic_Clara
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    ah. another one F. goodbye author

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  • ZCOOL_999
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    oh please I really enjoy criminal minds and if you put some of NCIS in this fic. you have 1 vote daily garantesaid

    2. Our MC is a Spencer Reid level intellect. Is spencer there in this world?? Well, that only time will tell 😉.
    Reincarnated into an AU world of TV
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    I really enjoy the chapter. a very good ending at style castle.[img=recommend]

    Guys, please tell me you enjoyed the ending because that for me was the moment I fell in love with the show and Stana Katic. (Comment here.)
    Reincarnated into an AU world of TV
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  • ZCOOL_999
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    le salio un barba nlanca a yuji

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  • ZCOOL_999
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    that sword or dagger split souls so yeah it is op

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