Thanks for writing. I very much like the spin you took on Asoiaf with Ned, as long as he doenst become a full time prankster, the stark family, the story, conflicts with the south and magic. The characters and locations feel very much alive and "real" in a sense, maybe introduc a touch more information about how certain people or locations differentiate between each other. Scars, history with bandits, how streets smell. Something like that 😁 Keep up the good work. Have a great weekend. 😊👍
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