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It has not become the V6 yet, ut is currently the V5 until after the Chimera Ant Arc
I understand, I just like this story very much and I think that if the grammar was a little better, it would be amazing.
*Velaryon
This flag looks very plain, maybe something with more detail to it?
I think that this is a very good start to a story and that this story can receive regular updates; it will be one of the top stories in Marvel fanfiction. I would suggest also fleshing out the main characters more in the upcoming chapters so that you have more ground to stand on by building relationships between them. Overall, I think this story has great potential, and I can't wait to continue reading it!
Amazing! Simply amazing! The story is really well thought out and the challenged that the MC goes through and overcomes are amazing. The only negative thing that I would have to say was the ending, it was a little lackluster and wasn't really setup. If there were hints about what was going to happen in the end, then I would have been alright with it, but beggars can't be choosers.
It technically is not a crown but a circlet. It was only worn during times of war and conquest, other than by Aegon I, Aenys, and Maegor.
Aegon the Conquerer's crown was made of Valyrian Steel, set with big square-cut rubies.
Whoa, Whoa, Whoa! Is he saying that he orchestrated the death of Aemma Arryn, Baelon and Rheynra's mother, who died while giving birth to Baelon?
Very interesting concept. The grammar and writing quality are very good. The only potential issue that I see with the character is that he could get very strong very fast, and then it would not feel worth it. Maybe remove some of his powers or change them to suit his Valyrian heritage? Please implement challenges and obstacles for our MC to face that naturally flow with the story and further the plot. I just wish you would post longer chapters more frequently because this is a great story with great potential!
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