Very interesting concept. The grammar and writing quality are very good. The only potential issue that I see with the character is that he could get very strong very fast, and then it would not feel worth it. Maybe remove some of his powers or change them to suit his Valyrian heritage? Please implement challenges and obstacles for our MC to face that naturally flow with the story and further the plot. I just wish you would post longer chapters more frequently because this is a great story with great potential!
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