So far im really enjoying this novel. the grammar isnt bad and though some earlier chapters may need some editing, i believe over all, its not bad. The beginning was a bit rushed but if you over look that the slower pace the novel has after the first few chapters is really nice. The characters arent perfect and they seem pretty human to me. We still havent seen too much developement with danny and ivan but im sure itll come. it is quite early into the novel after all. The powers are interesting, and its nice to see them not too overpowered right from the beginning. Johnathan may have a very op ability but its good that he has restrictions on it. Over all, for where it is right now, I believe it deserves 5 stars. however that might change later on so thats when ill do a follow up review.

Nice

Nice chap! Time stop is such a cool ability. wish i had in irl lol.

Sucks that he couldnt save his brother but looking forward for the future. Good arc though! Cant wait for the future.

Good chapter. I like it.

Amazing novel! Def one of my fsvourites